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Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

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My Sea God
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My Sea God


Slowly I rise,
Heavy with child,
And shake the clinging sand
From my hair…

The wind whispers,
And I feel the sand shifting uneasily,
Urgently pleading me to hurry,
Before the tide goes out again…

Waves of electric sea foam,
Flay my cheeks red,
And I taste him,
Salty man,
Water-hewed-

He rises then,
Like a forgotten God-
Wearing sea-white phosphorus for his robe-
His eyes are sea green and the deepest blue,
So like the midnight sky-

The tide calls out a warning-
And he beckons to me!
Wasted residue of scarred,
And tortured land creature…

He calls me to him,
Through our unborn child,
His name a whisper on my lips,
That I can’t forget…


The shell creatures scratch their approval,
On rocks bloodied by the moon,
How to refuse?

I enter his arms,
Feeling his cold strength
Flow into my soul,
His cold lips kiss hungrily
As the waves pass overhead…

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 Reviews of "My Sea God"
Reviewed by jing javier
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
absolutely stunning

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
WONDERFUL WRITE REINDEER
EXCELLENT

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Hi Reindeer,
Outstanding once again...
Beautiful write...

Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Awesome, indeed.
Peace,
Cherokee

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
I could feel the cold hands wrapping around her. Great write.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
AWESOME! the imagery surpassed beauty

Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Wow...outstanding images...super write. ~Trish~

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
5-18-03

Don't Forget To Come Up For Air__Neat!

TRASK

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
your poems are always a delight to read... they bring me places so few sojourn ;)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Your damn Great!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Retta this is so very unique and lovely.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Dear Retta, Excellent romantic piece. My mystery lady is the desert princess.



tony

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Wow! I loved the imagery on this great write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
I liked the imagery of this one!!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Wonderful as always, Reindeer!!

Love, Dove

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
You're damn good.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
You're good!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
outstanding imagery Reindeer! I love this, and have a passion for anything to do with the ocean, guess my pisces sign is why;-)


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