This poem deserves to be written in a classic book of masterpieces. You have captured this with such a tender heart and soul.
Amor
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
I hate the child abusers
Will it ever end?
Excellent write.......
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
Retta ~ I am speechless..
This is so emotional it
has me in tears. I write
alot about child abuse and
pain..but you paint a perfect
picture of the horror. This
is an amazing write that all
should see.
~~Linda~~
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
What a sad and tragic story. S
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
Reindeer,
This is just a magnificent piece of work! Thank You!
a delicately written moving and meaningful piece, tks
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
Emotive write, I'd love law to allow us to have just 5 mins with such people, no scum..
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
I am speechless too, through tears. Excellent write.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
I have only tears, Retta, I'm sorry, just have no words.
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
so many emotions going on right now it is hard to respond. this is so hard to write about and you have done so perfectly.
Bless you for this heartfelt write
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
Bastards
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
This was the first poem I'd read in this series...it is now in my library.
I have read many a poem on authors den. One that hits a person in the heart I could have only read it here. This is a wonderful poem about a terrible abuse of our greatest asset on this earth. Our Children.
May the angels always be with you my friend.
~~Linda~~
Sorry mate for popping back,
the poem I mentioned is actually titled:
Memories of Angie.died 2000
Reviewed by COLINANDKAY
Reviewed on June 3, 2003
This brought tears to my eyes and deep pain in my heart,I don't think I have ever read a more beautiful poem on abuse,the scars it leaves,or a better understanding or explanation of the right way to listen and to be when one such person has been hurt so.... (I do NOT know 1st hand of this but I try to empathize ,though I could never really imagine the extent of suffering or hurt,it would be too hard to imagine).This poem belongs on the walls of Child welfare centers and it would be my honour to send it to as many as possible in my own country if you approve it.
Let me know please.If you ever read my poem 'Angelique' you will know why I want your poem read.I can't remember if it is on this site but it is on The Starlite Cafe my pen name there is
Kay p m-devenish
You have moved me very much with this poem.Excellent work!
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
The e-book version of Sam Vaknin's "Malignant Self - Love - Narcissism Revisited". Contains the entire text: essays, frequently asked questions and
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Amor
Will it ever end?
Excellent write.......
This is so emotional it
has me in tears. I write
alot about child abuse and
pain..but you paint a perfect
picture of the horror. This
is an amazing write that all
should see.
~~Linda~~
This is just a magnificent piece of work! Thank You!
~Joseph
What a sad powerful write...
Excellent write...
Trixie :)
--Karissa
William
Bless you for this heartfelt write
May the angels always be with you my friend.
~~Linda~~
the poem I mentioned is actually titled:
Memories of Angie.died 2000
Let me know please.If you ever read my poem 'Angelique' you will know why I want your poem read.I can't remember if it is on this site but it is on The Starlite Cafe my pen name there is
Kay p m-devenish
You have moved me very much with this poem.Excellent work!
tony
Love
tinka