He stands brave and true ,
Holding out his hands,
His heart full of love and promises
He means to keep-
But his Lady Fair turns away,
Untrusting and Afraid,
For her heart has been mortally wounded…
Lies barely beating on the distant shore,
Waiting for the tide to return,
And bury it once more…
The knight stares into her vacant eyes,
And knows in his heart,
She is no longer even there-
Understands at last,
What part his love will play in this drama,
If he is to know victory today-
His path is clear as he measures
The heavily barred gate-
Measuring his internal strength
Against the iron she has piled there…
He plans with his heart,
How best to penetrate that wall,
Built so well by Pain’s daughter-
Looks and reads the ordinate sign
Carved on the door to her heart…
Reads with eyes misty and teared,
For carved in blood for all to see,
Lie the words that make him weep…
“Be warned all who dare to enter here-
For here there be Dragons of fierce fire,
Grim Gargoyles guarding every path,
Their shiny scimitars raised on high-
Ready to behead any mortal man,
Who dares to enter this barren wasteland…”
Wow...can you ever write poetry!!!
best wishes from Kay
ps.
I am still in process of sending stone child poem to centers...will let you know when I have done it all.
kay
Painfully moving, Oh, Retta, so beautifully done, written with/from within that 'daughter' of 'Pain'...
(((You)))
This piece, words so beautifully used to so honestly show the bare fear and steel and yet, the Man is of kindness and more...God, this piece is amazing!
magic, indeed. real, all too real, all too...
Love, dear you!
bravo for the courage of this, as well
mi
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best wishes from Kay
ps.
I am still in process of sending stone child poem to centers...will let you know when I have done it all.
kay
(((You)))
This piece, words so beautifully used to so honestly show the bare fear and steel and yet, the Man is of kindness and more...God, this piece is amazing!
magic, indeed. real, all too real, all too...
Love, dear you!
bravo for the courage of this, as well
mi
Excellent_
Remember That Door To Your Heart Is Also That Gate(Way) To Heaven...
TRASK
Buddy
~Joseph
~Chrissie
Always an excellent read of your writing!
tony
Stunning poem, very atmospheric
Big miss happening on my last write...it should of ended...
The windows is starless…. Still
The clock is ticking…
It’s past midnight
I rest my pen… sleep
Love
Tinka
I truely love your pen...pure gold
William
Peace,
Cherokee
~Nikki~