My Slow Heart (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

A wonderful write Reindeer
Excellent

William

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

Once bitten , twice shy as this poem shows.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

A beautiful write...but even a tattered heart needs to mend...just takes the right one.
~Trish~

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

6-11-03

Romantic You!

TRASK

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

Emotionally powerful great write!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

Hi Rein, Wow, This write was absolutely Great!!

tony

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

Wow. This is so beautiful. I'd advise: Give him a chance and let it happen. Don't fear the feelings. Love. S.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 10, 2003

This is so beautiful so romantic and bittersweet !!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

A beautifully penned
reluctant reluctance!
Write on, Retta!
Leland

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Need to find someone with your pace. The chasm is real. Don't try to mend it.

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Retta,
If his feelings for you are genuine, he will work on your time frame.

Hugs,
The Voice

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Reindeer you have such a fine grasp of emotions this is a superb example of one not being able to supply what another needs and both feeling the frustration of it!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Anything I get in a hurry with will mess up
Great thinking and writing

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

The lack of trust due to prior heartache will always reap heartache. That is what love is about and you being ready, is a great part of it too.
Amor

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Awww..
I hope he takes it slow...
and allow love to grow...
Jenni

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

Baby steps. He'll just have to wait
Nice write

Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

This reaches in side my soul..
"He whispers such kind words,
But I have heard them before,
And they fall on deaf ears,
I do not believe a word he says,"
Mister

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2003

The wounded heart is the cautious one...even a fearing one.

Beautifully written.