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To Those Traveling Light In The World
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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To those traveling light in the world,
I bid you fare thee well,
And please reveal your secrets,
I beg you.
Tell…

For my journeys are long,
And wear me down,
I need to believe,
Find a way to relieve,
This burden I carry
Where ever I go…

There is much in the world,
I do not believe in-
Neither gods nor men,
And how sad I was to discover,
That one of them was you…
Your love and the many things you do,
Taught me to build walls,
You could never scale…
Your love,
Was never one I took well…


Yet you are in my heart,
Like we never came apart,
I see your eyes,
When ever I look
At the summer skies,
And that wild wheat,
That grows so well,
Reminds me so,
Of your golden hair...

The wild sage,
With its musky smell,
Was always a way that I could tell,
You were standing somewhere near,
And it always eased my fear…
But I set you free,
Fearing you couldn’t love me,
Could never understand,
What I was trying to be…

My scars scared you,
You couldn’t bear the stories
That they would tell,
Fearing it meant,
You weren’t enough for me,
I wish I could make you see,
It was always you,
That set me free…

The lines I draw so fine,
Explain and define,
The agony I hide inside,
Cover all that is real,
And the pain that I feel,
When I could not understand,
What kind of man,
You must be,
To love someone like me…

I lost you,
And I lost me,
With deeds you can’t forgive,
And no matter how much
You tried to give
Me a reason to stay,
I pushed you away,
Until all that is left
Is this gift of stone,
I carry with me as I travel alone,
Seeking your face,
Missing your strong embrace,
Carrying the weight of my sin,
Hoping one day
We shall find each other again…

So to those who travel light,
To those who can sleep at night,
Tell me your secret,
While I take a moment to sit,
For I am growing weary,
This sadness rather scary,
And seek to lay me down,
Wish to be buried in the ground,
Next to those I once loved...

Shall find the beauty of your eyes,
In the hot summer skies,
And whisper words,
I should have told you then-
Please forgive my sin,
Of never being able to say,
I love you today, tomorrow, and yesterday,
I love you for all eternity,
And hope to find you
At the end of my journey,

Where you and I,
Can let our burdens lie,
And travel as light,
As the breeze
On a long summer night,
Let our love carry us high,
And say goodbye
To all that we left behind…


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 Reviews of "To Those Traveling Light In The World"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2003
I wish I could make you see that it was always you that set me free.....just one of all the fantastic sentences in this poem. I can feel the sadness. Outstanding write. S.

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Awesome write, Reindeer... great imagery!!
Jenni

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
This will touch the heart and the soul of the one you speak of. Great write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Reindeer, you never cease to amaze me! Brilliant verse!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Dear Retta, I can never tell enough how great a Wrier You Are!
I enjoyed this read immensely!


tony

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
6=13=-3

Excellent__

You Got To Not Look Back, But To The (Your Dreams) Future!

TRASK

Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Outstanding! Beautiful write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
No comment to touched by this!!
< < <Tears>>>

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Outstanding write!!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Awesome Ride! ;)

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Never give up on love! Enjoy it when it comes....if it seems right for you! Great sad poem!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Retta, excellent write.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Beautiful, heart rending poetry, Reindeer.
~Chrissie

Reviewed on June 13, 2003
lovely write, reindeer! enjoyed~ love, your tormented texas friend (thanks to all these stupid storms!), karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :0 (how i look when it storms; i am PETRIFIED of them, especially when they go severe! :( )

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Such a beautiful poem hun. Why not wrap it up and send it on to the one you love? (smile) Its never too late to begin again. Hope lives eternal. One thing I am beginning to learn is that the first secret in learning to travel light is that forgiveness begins within.

Namaste'
Melanie

Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Oh...this is so beautiful and so very, very sad. ~Kerry

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Another outstanding write! Cast away those burdens to the sea now ... whisper that forgiveness and shout the I Love You's! Why wait?

~Joseph

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Beautifully written and deeply felt poetry...
Especially like that ending verse, too...

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Wonderfully written! ~SH~

Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
this is wonderful, tks (i wish for the last verse)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2003
Beautiful work.


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