Don't Bleed For Me... (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 26, 2003

Retta,

Felt and understood this one!! This is really deep on so many levels!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed on June 26, 2003

You are so in tune with pain,you see the wheels turn and know why and how and when,you must lose so much sleep worrying over those sad hurt fragile souls,I know you must as it is so evident that you have an incredible empathy to those who have suffered.They are so lucky to have you but it must drain you so and weigh you down.Your love for them is clearly very real.
Your poetry takes the reader right there where truth jumps out ...shocking at times but always genuine emotion.Thank you for sharing.
I have to write that this is a masterpiece for....it is.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 26, 2003

I have no words, touched to the core.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on June 26, 2003

{{{Rhetta}}}
Such excellant raw emotion within this one, with intesity and power that yes does take your breath away...SUPERB WORK!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 26, 2003

Retta,

great emotional write from you...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Retta, this is awesome..
You are an amazing poet.
I will be reading more
of you.

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Reindeer, you're not good for my health, you always make me hold my breath;-)superb poetry!

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Wonderfully expressed poetry...Bravo!!

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

The raw pain here is very compelling, and somewhat overwhelming. {{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

(((reindeer)))

so much emotion and tears in this one...well done

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

an outstanding write Trish
as usual....
enjoyable reading

William

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Wow....super piece....~Trish~

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Hi Reindeer,
Oh I love this one...
Outstanding indeed...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

I think I am bleeding to death after this beauty....Retta???

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Reindeer, this is a wonderful piece.
Speaking from the other side...
sometimes bleeding is all we have left.

-James

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

outstanding write, reindeer; well done! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Wow! Outstanding piece!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

This was quite painful to read. But it said so many things. Very touching,,~SH~

Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Power of love is so crazy somtimes. Great write!

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Very touching poem.
Enjoyed reading it.
Love
S

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Leaves me speechless, Retta....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

You don't need to bleed for me. How intense this write is. One for my library!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

This made me gasp, Reindeer...an outstanding piece and very moving.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Excellent write .....
Keep smiling friend

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Nothing left for me to say. As always..

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Good Morning, Retta
As always wonderfully written!

tony

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Retta, outstanding poem.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on June 25, 2003

Such depth and emotion. Exquisitely done, Reindeer. Powerful and beautiful alike.
Peace,
Jill