These Broken Children,
Come to me,
Are drawn to me,
By some unseen string
That binds us together across time...
I recognize the signs-
Their sad eyes,
or vacant stare,
The scars-
The way they watch me,
To always know where I am...
One of my young friends,
Flashed me his arms,
To show me where
He had carved tally marks-
To mark his days of pain...
To show his mother,
That nothing she did,
Could compare to
What he did to himself...
Yet,
When he saw the sadness he had caused me,
He shrugged his thin shoulders,
And smiled sadly,
Saying softly that if he carved enough,
Soon he'd be all gone...
This broken child,
With scars to share,
And stories to tell-
Made me weep and remember
My own Hell-
I told him;
"You can survive this...
You can escape-"
I hope I didn't lie...
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Reviews of "Broken Children Need Broken Adults"
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Powwwwwerrrrful stir it speaks volumes and that is neccessary
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
{{{{Rhetta}}}}
This is a subject that when heard or written about causes such tears, bitterness and pain, yet you my dearest friend have done this a most noble justice with your poetic words...BEAUTIFUL, SAD, HAUNTING WRITE!!!!
~Nikki~
Powerful...absolutely took my breath away...a short composition that has an impact more powerful than reading an entire book...this must be published for all to read...outstanding...
This is so sad, Reindeer. Beautifully written, though.
Jill :)
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
GM, Retta
I guess he will survive the ravages of an early death. But will he ever survive the pounding of demons. Excellent write, you unblocked me...LOL
5 star poem!!
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This is a subject that when heard or written about causes such tears, bitterness and pain, yet you my dearest friend have done this a most noble justice with your poetic words...BEAUTIFUL, SAD, HAUNTING WRITE!!!!
~Nikki~
This:
To show his mother,
That nothing she did,
Could compare to
What he did to himself...
is the part that brings tears with it. You handled a horrible subject with gentleness and delicacy.
excellent
William
Peace,
Cherokee
God Bless
~Michelle~
~Joseph
Jim
thank you dearest for sharing, love!! Here's a hug..!
Love,
Dove
Amor
Leland
I knowing something of this and your words have rocked me. You're an amazing writer.
~Chrissie
Take care
Jill :)
I guess he will survive the ravages of an early death. But will he ever survive the pounding of demons. Excellent write, you unblocked me...LOL
5 star poem!!
tony:)