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Broken Children Need Broken Adults
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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These Broken Children,
Come to me,
Are drawn to me,
By some unseen string
That binds us together across time...
I recognize the signs-
Their sad eyes,
or vacant stare,
The scars-
The way they watch me,
To always know where I am...

One of my young friends,
Flashed me his arms,
To show me where
He had carved tally marks-
To mark his days of pain...
To show his mother,
That nothing she did,
Could compare to
What he did to himself...
Yet,
When he saw the sadness he had caused me,
He shrugged his thin shoulders,
And smiled sadly,
Saying softly that if he carved enough,
Soon he'd be all gone...

This broken child,
With scars to share,
And stories to tell-
Made me weep and remember
My own Hell-

I told him;
"You can survive this...
You can escape-"

I hope I didn't lie...


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 Reviews of "Broken Children Need Broken Adults"
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Powwwwwerrrrful stir it speaks volumes and that is neccessary

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
{{{{Rhetta}}}}
This is a subject that when heard or written about causes such tears, bitterness and pain, yet you my dearest friend have done this a most noble justice with your poetic words...BEAUTIFUL, SAD, HAUNTING WRITE!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Heartbreaking and all too vivid.

This:

To show his mother,
That nothing she did,
Could compare to
What he did to himself...

is the part that brings tears with it. You handled a horrible subject with gentleness and delicacy.

Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Oh....this is so very very sad...I am glad that these beautiful lost children have a caring and loving guide in you! ~Kerry

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Well done....

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
a sad write wonderfully presented
excellent

William

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
So heartbreaking......so well written.....and even in its sadness so beautiful.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
REINDEER BLESS YOU FOR BEING THERE! THIS IS HEART WRENCHING, BUT BEAUTIFULLY DONE!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
One of your best works.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Very touching write, Retta!

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
A moving poem, dear lady.
Peace,
Cherokee

Reviewed by The Gentle Man
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Retta, this is so very touching and what a worthwhile desire it is to help children in need. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Powerful...absolutely took my breath away...a short composition that has an impact more powerful than reading an entire book...this must be published for all to read...outstanding...

Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Heartbreaking piece, but so well done... You have an amzing talent
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Retta -- It's amazing, your strength, it is shining through this piece. I salute you.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Reindeer, I'm so glad that I'm able to read your writings! They assist me in growing, stretching, evolving! Thank you!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Excellent write Reindeer. Show them the way.

~Joseph

Reviewed by J. R. Corbin
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Tragically beautiful...so sad...but so profound
Jim

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Oh sweetest light,
thank you dearest for sharing, love!! Here's a hug..!

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Beautiful write...so sad yet powerfully written.
Amor

Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Retta...a truly beautiful write. Sad, but wonderful.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Beautifully written Retta!!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Very powerful, sad story, Rhetta. Tony has it right. This is a five star.
Leland

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Reindeer,
I knowing something of this and your words have rocked me. You're an amazing writer.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
One of the most powerful things I've ever read, and so true.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
U never lied frined ... Nice write ...
Take care

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
This is so sad, Reindeer. Beautifully written, though.
Jill :)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
GM, Retta
I guess he will survive the ravages of an early death. But will he ever survive the pounding of demons. Excellent write, you unblocked me...LOL
5 star poem!!


tony:)


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