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Love Blossoms Beyond The Wall
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Love Blossoms Beyond The Wall




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Summer comes in all its heat,
All the flowers lie wilted,
Bent by defeat,
Yet the moon rises,
And brings sweet relief,
Drives me into the night,
Walking paths lit by starlight…

The night,
Surrounds me with gentle beauty,
Shadows of things I love to see,
In the brightness of the day,
Now softly muted,
Plump and grey…

The moon peers her lovely head,
From beneath the heavy cloud,
And I hear his whispered voice,
Echoing among the trees;
“Are you there my love?
Are you here?”

I stop and listen
To his soft breathing,
Trying to see where he is hiding,
But the shadows are deep,
And dark,
And my eyes are weak,
In the shadowed moon light…

I smell him,
Soft and fragrant,
Wild sage on his clothes,
And honey suckled breath,
I feel his strength in the forest,
And seek to rest my hand,
On my beating heart,
Trying to still its loud drumming,
He will hear me coming!

The moon smiles brightly,
And I see him then,
Outlined in its white light,
How glorious he looks,
On this wonderful night…

He reaches for me,
Pulls me to his chest,
I stare into his dark eyes,
And his lips meet mine,
And under the moon-filled sky,
He promises to love me,
For all time…

His love surrounds me,
Encircles me with truth,
Capturing that wild spirit,
Which once ran free among the earth,
And I am not fettered by his love at all,

Though I once feared its call,
I realize now,
I am free at last,
For love has blossomed,
And blooms once more,
In the Garden of Stone,
Beyond the Wall…

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 Reviews of "Love Blossoms Beyond The Wall"
Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
very good!!!

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
This was truly a captivating write! Your words poured with passion and you kept me bound in the trance of your awesome poetry! Very excellent work!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
Captivating lush beauty..the core and essence of Love such as is rarely sensed and known in this dimension.
Excellent write ..
Vesna

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
This is a fantastic one.
Also like the pic.
S

Reviewed on July 2, 2003
romantically romantic. "beyond the wall." soooooooo capitvating. i've knocked down many walls. some of them held treasures and some held displeasures. You'll never know until you go. G

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
Sensational imagery in a most stunning romantic piece!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
Rhetta my goodness I see a different light coming from you...so lighthearted and romantic in this piece it doth shine...what a absolutely elegant write!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
In this beauty you are peaceful and fulfilled, something different from past posts. Be well and happy.
Leland

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
Exquisite beauty!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
You just keep getting better and better.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
This one is breath taking!

Reviewed by m w
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
Love - the essance of Truth wrapped in an intimate touch

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
After reading and feeling your past poems I am now drawn to shed a little tear ...not out of sadness but from relief,beyond the wall long after all the stone...blossoms are flowering...I am ssssssooooooo
happy.
I am breathing a deep sigh and am very relaxed from this fantastic bright poem!
Bravo!
Love from
kay.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
Beautiful and heartfelt
write Retta. I hope
love has blossomed in
your world. :)

~~Linda~~

Reviewed on July 2, 2003
A beautiful romantic write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 1, 2003
your verses are so beautiful Retta!!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2003
Sweet one.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2003
excellect romance
Wonderfully written
This made my day ...
Superb Retta my friend
You made it so beautifuly

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on July 1, 2003
Ture love...the freedom it brings....wonderful, passionate write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 1, 2003
Superb verses, that capture the heart!

Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2003
Very good my friend..I love the pic
and I can just imagine the love behind the
wall!
Mister

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2003
This runs so smoothly- and yet it captures ones breath away with its beauty...


Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on July 1, 2003
7-01-03

You Romantic You!

TRASK


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