Sometimes, You Scare Me... (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

"But once I see you,
There is nothing left to do,

But love you..."

That is the very essence of romance. Great write!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

spectucular passionate expression!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

7-11-03

Ya Don't Take A Chance On Romance Ya Not Only Lose Ya Despise Romance!

TRASK

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Beautiful and loving write.

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Oh wow. This is great
I know this feeling all too well. You wrote it perfectly.
Nothing left to do
then love you.......
go for it Retta.
Love
Nico

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Excellent write ...
Nice feeling ...
Good thought ...
Your feeling are so real and really true ...
Love is sometimes like this ...
Sitll people are in love ...
Many with true hearts ..

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Beautiful expressions of vulnerability. This touched me, Reindeer.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Don't let fear stand in the way
of love, my friend. Try to
overcome it. Excellent write,
as always from you.

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Know the feeling Retta!!
This one moved something inside of me!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

I like this one.. Oh, I think men are scary little things.. do not worry.. they are the same, LOL!
a lucid poem!
Nevine

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Great write, feel the emotion.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Hi Retta,
"Fear"
Such a big factor,
for such a short word.
Written so beautiful..

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

That is the thing about Love ... we cannot give it until/unless we open our hearts and make ourselves vulnerable. Beautifully written Reindeer.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Why was I Simon, oh well Simon says, Ain't it the truth.

Reviewed by Simon

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Ain't it the truth!

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

I do say as I get older I don't carry the truth as well as I used to...I keep spilling it now.
Life is to short. We have these feelings...so I go ahead and admit it.
Come what may, I will have been me.
Best wishes.
John

Reviewed by Brittany Ren�e

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Aww, how precious!
Love is intimidating, yes.
-br-

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Sometimes love can be quite intimidating, especially when you are afraid to tell them so, in fear they don't feel the same way. In life though some chances must be taken, this would be one of them. Great write! ~SH~

Reviewed by David Knight

Reviewed on July 11, 2003

Feelings taht we've all felt, though maybe not admitted, put into lovely verse.