The Memory Of Love (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Excellent my friend..
Mister

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Believer in love. Excellent write. Beautiful.

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Perhaps we forget that nothing lasts forever, minute by minute we're changing. Enjoy love while it's yours, take comfort in love's memory when/if it fades. Great poem, Reindeer!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

better to be loved and not forgotten... excellent write...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Simply awesome!
Beautiful picture...

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Beautifully written, like the picture also.

Nancy

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Reindeer,
Oh this one is so beautiful and bittersweet,
a perfect poem.
"His love is a dagger in my heart,
That flashes like lightening,
Even when we are apart�
Mile upon mile,
Yet the distance means nothing,
For like a wizard,
He casts his spell,
With sweet words,
And I am doomed to live in this hell,
That is his love for me� "
PJ

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Deeply beautiful! I'm feeling this!
Shy

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Reindeer,
I like your use of winter as the backdrop for this poem--depicting the seperation from love as winter is often associated with. Nice work. J.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Beautiful work, Retta. I've missed reading you.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Beautiful sad write.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Well Retta,
Looks like it's all
been said...

Fabulous write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

So sad and weepy. You did a nice job with this.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Very melancholy write, my friend.

Reviewed by Cynthia Pagliolo (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

An excellent write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Oh Retta why are on the same level today for sure.........this is one of those I could be the author myself...Gad dammit why???
Why doe loving some one hurt so bloody much??? I feel for you my friend.....be sure of that!!

Warm love and Hugs to you!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Oh, Retta...the poignancy and unmitigated yearning in your piece pierces the heart and mind. Sweet Reindeer, never put your hand on that blade, again. The uniqueness of you must stay until your time comes. Think, ponder write, and live. :)

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

pat yourself on the back, this is an excellent poem

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Oh Retta, how I love your work, this is breathtaking.

Reviewed by Anastacia Lee (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Wonderful write! Had me into it throgh every word!
Be well
Ana Lee

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

beautiful write, Reindeer. The picture explains everything.

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Reindeer, what an excellent, feeling write! I felt this one....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

This is beautiful, and I really needed to read something like this before I go off to War.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Retta, first of all the picture is outstanding! If you mind let me know, but I have saved it into my picture gallery to use later. Sometimes seems impossible, to make a dream come true. Isn't that where dreams come from though, the impossible? In friendship. Bill

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

an excellent write My friend,
lets hope thta's all it is

William

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

Excellent and more beautiful Retta ....
Thanks for sharing ...