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Shedding My Skin...
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I don’t expect you to understand,
After all you’re just a man,
But last night I shed my skin,
In a dream so damn real,
I could even feel,
The skin curl and cried in pain,
Felt like I was going insane…

It started at my hands,
So finely scarred,
Lovely lines hued in red,
That bubbled up like it was dead…

I picked and pulled until it came apart,
And you should have seen me start,
When I pulled back the sleeve,
My stomach begins to heave…

But then I saw something so strange,
The skin below was unchanged-
New and unblemished,
And suddenly I realized,
It was because of you…

Your love is changing me,
Not sure of what I will be,
But now I begin to see,
A new me…

I see the light in the world again,
It’s all because of you my friend,
I can smell the flowers sweet fragrance,
And the dream begins to make sense…

My life is changing from what it has been,
I am feeling love again,
Scary and yet brave too,
Because I can’t help but love you-

I wish you could see this new skin,
So beautiful and new,
And it’s all because of you,
And the wonderful things you do...

I guess I have only one thing left to say,
Because suddenly I realized to day;
I love you,
And know in my heart,
You love me too…



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 Reviews of "Shedding My Skin..."
Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2003
Such beautiful and refreshing fruits are brought forth on your artistic tree. You truly have a creative and passionate heart.

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on July 21, 2003
A remarkable perfect write! Bravo
*Marlene*

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 21, 2003
this poem is perfect!!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2003
Welse can I say. It's a perfect poem of llove and wanting. That's what.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
Shed away...this poem is perfect!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
This is beautiful Retta!

Jack

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
So very lovely and touching. So happy for you

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
Beautiful heartfelt write Retta!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
This is great! Really felt it...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
as a man, i understand this is a very passionate poem...

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
Great poem Reindeer, unusual subject! Renewal is good.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
your new skin sounds wonderful

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
I leave my skin under every rock I crawl under, Loved this one

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
Beautiful write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
An awesome perceptive poem Reindeer! You are a wonder;-)!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
Beautiful, incredible write.


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