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I Love You...
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I Love You




Wishing you were here,
To take my mind off this fear,
I am feeling tonight,
Feel like walking away,
Pass from the day…

If you were touching my lips,
I would be in such bliss,
I would smile and say,
Never go away…

Feeling so down,
Wishing I was buried in the ground,
They wonder why I am here,
Don’t understand,
It’s where I hide my tears…

Wishing you were here,
Wouldn’t matter what you do,
Just hold me close,
And chase away the ghosts-

And the demons of the present,
I would savor your sweet scent,
And love every moment we spent
In each other’s arms,
Exploring your charms…

I think of you during the day,
And you help me so much,
Showing me the way,
Making me believe again,
And I would say,
Never leave,
Make me believe in love once more…

At night when you sleep my love,
The touch you feel on your cheek is me,
Kissing you so softly,
So you don’t wake up…

The weight on your shoulder is me,
Laying my head on your chest,
And singing softly in your ears,
Sweet songs for only you to hear…

If your fingers are sore,
It’s because I was holding your hand,
As you slept,
Wishing those hands were mine,
To kiss and love forever…

Dream of me my love,
As I dream of you,
And maybe we can be together,
If only in our dreams,
For one lovely night…

I love you,
Think of nothing except
That a sweet prince loves me,
As I love him…

I don’t why you came,
Or if you’ll stay,
But no matter what you do,
My heart and soul,
Belong to you,
Because,

I love you.


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 Reviews of "I Love You..."
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
A wonderful poem about love and longing. Reflects my feelings so much.
Love that one.
S

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2003
Superb! SO very well written and the emotions expressed are so without the cloying cuteness of adolescence -- a love poem for adults (sans the usual dip into erotica). Those differences make this a quality write! Really, really great work!

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
Beautifully romantic.

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
This is such a pretty write Reindeer! Love it!

Jack

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
Since Love Is Myth, You'll Find Compassion is True Love You Won't Hafta Wish, Hope Or Pray_

It-He Will Come To You!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
Absolutely beautiful !

Reviewed on August 3, 2003
this is so breathtaking, reindeer; well done! :) (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
So Beautiful.
With a title like that it had to be.
Precious words...every one.
John

Reviewed on August 3, 2003
This is so heartfelt, Reindeer! I love this...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
Excellent Retta ...
Excellent Romance ...
Excellent thoughts ...
Excellent Excellent ...

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
An outpouring of love from your heart. I adore that picture ... what's it called?

~Joseph

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
very touching love write Retta!!

Love
tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
A very touchy love write...such a sweet sweet write....thank u....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 3, 2003
A very yearning and loving poem, Reindeer. Very well expressed!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Reindeer}

Sigh!!!!!!!!! The romance and beauty of this one is so excellent.. I love the art....
"I don’t why you came,
Or if you’ll stay,
But no matter what you do,
My heart and soul,
Belong to you,
Because,

I love you. "
PJ

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Heartfelt yearning love Reindeer, I know this feeling;-)Well done!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
A beautiful surprise read, Rein. To be honest I have not read you in 5 weeks, so the change in subject is my surprise. Your writing is still supreme!


tony:)

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Sweet honesty. Beautifully expressed and filled with love and longing

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
This is so sweet...hope your dreams come true! ~Z~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
If that's you in pic, I may do more than dream, I'll put on armour and win fair maidens heart:)))

Georgeous poem


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