Trish's Challenge: Where Dreams Come True (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on August 12, 2003

A very dreaming poetic expression. I really enjoyed reading and living for a few minutes in this dream. G

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2003

I love the photo and the dream. Great write. Wonderful response to the challenge.

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

Poet of Gods heart, the flow sings its own song. Silent as the doves who flaps there wings. Master poet of God.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

I agree with everyone...
This is simply beautiful...

Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

a wonderful write, the opening stanza rocks. peace

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

Ohhh so perfect. Beautiful picture too...where is it taken?

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

Beautiful, as ever, I hope it comes true for you. Jackie <> <

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

Absolutely gorgeous Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

Breathtaking picture and an excellent write...well i have all the praises for you....BHUWAN

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Absolutely gorgeous poem and picture! this goes in my library!

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Yes,this one is really special...sounds like 'love',to me.
Beautiful!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

A very beautiful write
Reindeer
excellent

William

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Beautiful poem Reindeer! Sounds like a wonderful place to me! Beautiful picture!

Jack

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Wonderful write. This is so mesmerizing, you made me want to be there too.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Beautiful words of comfort. Makes me want to take a lakeside vacation!
Great job, Reindeer.
Jill

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Another exceptional work from you. Bravo. Love it !!!

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

This is so soothing and beautiful, Retta... a wonderful place to be in, with, and within.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

As always Rein, beautifully written.
Kudos!

tony:)

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

very beautiful..Floreann

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Lovely creating of Utopia, Retta! There is, in fact, a similie to such when two people can combine into a single unit who balance each other and wend their way through life... You've got me musing, now! :)

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

This is truly sweet Retta,,so caring and full of sharing dreams! Great write,,~SH~

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Lovely Retta , so beautiful .... will love to travell all the places with you ... the place will look more beautiful if u are there ... and like your poetry ... the fragrance in the place will make it really refreshing... Kiss for you Retta

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

How Else Could I Show You,i.e. I Read Betwen The Lines Is How I Know You To Be True!

TRASK

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Beautifully written Reindeer!

~Joseph

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

I've been looking for this place my whole life.
You've done a beautiful job with this one Reindeer.
-James

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

I'm at a loss for words here.
The picture, the poetry.
My heart has just stopped.
I'm not reading anything else tonight.
This is all I want to see. I'll take this to my dreams.
Wonderful.
John