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Speak Softly...
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Speak Softly



Speak softly my love,
For my heart is filled with fear,
Such trembling in my soul,
Whenever you are near…

I seek the light of your love,
Enjoying the sound of your voice,
But the memories of the past,
Leave me little choice,

The door stays partially open,
So I always have a way out,
Hoping you understand,
What my fear is all about…

So long I stayed in the dark,
Hidden by its beauty,
I want to trust your heart,
But know you have your duty…

One day,
You shall walk away,
And I will be standing here,
Knowing all I have,
Is the realization of my fear…

You asked me to wait,
How long will I be able to?
I wonder if you even know,
What you ask me to do…

Feeling that rush of darkness,
Come crashing in,
Wanting to lie down among the leaves,
Wanting to believe,

One day you’ll return to me,
I wonder what you’ll see,
Will the woman you loved,
Still be me…
So speak softly my love,
Don’t tell me any lies,
Every time I think of your leaving,
A part of me dies…

In the morning dawn I stand,
Looking over the edge of the abyss,
Remembering the beauty,
Of our last kiss…

You keep promising to return one day,
I am hoping I can stay,
Just long enough to see it,
And hear you softly say;

“I love you baby,
And I’m never going away…”

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 Reviews of "Speak Softly..."
Reviewed by Rosalyn Smith
Reviewed on September 23, 2003
very beautifully written

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
So soft and tender, these words of love flow from your heart.

~Joseph

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
An eloquent whisper......Beautiful.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
HI Reta: This is heartfelt and beautiful...Thanks for sharing.

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
Very well expressed Retta! ~Z~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 10, 2003
Great emotions in this poem Retta!!

love tinka

Reviewed on September 9, 2003
The measure of true love is being able to trust another with every fiber of our beings. Easier said than done. Your peom reflects this fear perfectly, Retta!

A++++! Super write!

Julie :)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 9, 2003
Even when you close the door some light gets in. It is a hint that what is on the other side is more warming. We acn never really close our doors when the healthier choice is love.

Great emotion in this poem.
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 9, 2003
Beautifully written!I can feel the longing in this Reindeer, how much we all wish to hear those words spoken in truth by the one we love!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 9, 2003
Speak Softly And Carry a Big (Stick) Punch!!

It Is Strong Who Will Survive Your Pain Of Love,It Is Weak Who Cannot Know Compassion (True Love)Only Sufffering,i.e. Love...

TRASK

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2003
This is really excellent so beautiful and really lovely .... i loved this write ....

Beautiful write

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
Reviewed on September 9, 2003
very beautiful..Floreann

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on September 9, 2003
Sigh..this is so beautiful..but so sad..I can understand this perfectly..
Jenni

Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2003
Retta, this is absolutely beautiful! I love the way it flows and the rhyming is perfect! Great job!
- J -

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on September 9, 2003
a yearning poem.. lovely and soft.. I am feeling it

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2003
So beautiful and sad at the same time.

Reviewed on September 9, 2003
truly lovely and heartfelt write, reindeer; thanks for sharing! also love the pic; it fits the nature of this poem perfectly! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn.


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