The Blurred Truth Of Love (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 6, 2003

Oh how true this is Rein! It is better to have at least the love being blurred than no love at all. A most excellent write! Brava!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 6, 2003

Masterpiece.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on October 6, 2003

Wonderful....better to see blurry lines than the walls that would keep us from reaching out for our happiness!

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

My belove sister in spirit your strength stronger than the eagel, your pen shall speak the words of the ancestors, I salute for your image of the past shall never be forgotton, your armor of the pen speaks from the past and to the future. Blessing be upon your house the tool that spirit shall flow, the thousand voice that speaks with in. Blessing my sister in spirit.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

The last lines are right on
Lovely write......

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

You ,my friend have put it all in a nutshell...superb work ty

Vesna oxoxoxo

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Reindeer you write with such passion, I love this, great last verse!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

What more can be said that has not already been told in all the great reviews. I loved the poem for it really and truly touches the soul. Fantastic write.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

powerful poem!

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Superb write and deep wisdom :0)

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Reindeer,

This one line sums it up: "But I see all I need to believe". Thanks for sharing.

Tami

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

I like this idea...
and all this time, I thought I needed to get my eyes checked.
-James

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Penned from the heart..thoughts are so beautiful and so well written..

Love n Peace,
Debashish

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

One of your best, this is lovely work, Retta.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Reindeer,
A wonderful emotive poem
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Excellent description...and oh, so true..
Jenni

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

I love the notion you possess that the lines of love are often blurred and blend into reality. Beautiful emotions.
Amor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

WoW!! This is a magnificent write Retta!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

(((reindeer)))

powerful, wise write--well done

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Wise thoughts expressed in this write!

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Wonderfully written Rein..

Justin

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

ah yes...true,blind men and women can touch love too
if they just reach out.
Excellent enlightening poem.
Best wishes always
from
Kay.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Excellent write, Retta!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Love is blurred,
And I like it that way,
Love is only blind,
To those afraid to reach out,
And find what true love is all about… "

What wisdom lies here in a truth written in a way I've not read before... excellent... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

terrific write, reindeer; enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Wow ... Wow .... Beautiful my dear ...
This is really so beautiful and so nice

Good write and nice ending ...
Love means a lot ....

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

wonderful write..Floreann *****