What Is Forever? * For Peggy's Challenge (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

Agree with Emilie. Great response to the challenge! :)

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on November 16, 2003

an enjoyment to read this expression, hugs and cheers. G

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on November 15, 2003

"The sum of my dreams,
Add up to eternity,
And still I could not tell you,
What it means when I say,
I will love you forever and a day…"----WHAT AN OPENING STANZA! YAOWZA! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!

.... and the rest of your words build up and progress so fine to make a smooth transition to the "KISS ME NOW" part. THAT JUST BLEW ME AWAY! The swan images... and the questions too. You gave me chills. What a poet! Fine poet.

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on November 14, 2003

Excellent stuff

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on November 13, 2003

Retta ..you have outdone yourself...incredible piece!!..it's in my library..

Vesna

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on November 13, 2003

forever lies in the now, does it not? i think of it in a macro-cosmic way...they say that within each atom is an infinite distance, and, if the trusim, as above so below does reflect reality, why should that not apply to time as well as space? well written piece, poet! thank you!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

What a beautiful, deep reflection, just lovely, Retta.

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)

Reviewed on November 11, 2003

Wow..The longing and feelings conveyed with lifes passion..It is all worth it..Beautifully done...michael

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on November 11, 2003

forever will be found in the moments in his arms...such a good write!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 11, 2003

beautiful response!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 11, 2003

Wonderful write and interpretation for the challenge! I applaud this!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

I love these "Forever" writes. they are so romantic

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Wonderful response - forever is now...very true :0)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

You are right. Forever is now - always was, always will be.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Superbly romatically forever
Great write!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Good definition. Forever is unatainable if we think of the real meaning of the word. Today! I agree!

Carmen

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Reindeer...you can write about anything and do it well..this was compelling...I love the last verse...floria

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

You soared when you wrote this Reindeer! Way up above forever;-)Sublime poetry!have missed you!;-)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Superb challenge write, Reindeer!

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Excellent ... Excellent ... Excellent ...

What else can i say ...

This is so cute and really wonderful .... Ur kindness Ur Goodness ...

So sweet to see this write

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

The Den has so much talent. This is an absolutely beautiful description of forever,
Allen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Superbly done Retta!!

Brilliant response!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

terrific response to peggy's challenge; you met it with a flourish! well done, reindeer; enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

What a wonderful reflection

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Reindeer this is great!! I'm gonna have to give this challenge a try. Excellent!!!

Jack

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

Fantabulous write, Retta!

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

fond ideas Raindeer, and it seems we need it today, Al