No One Listens Anymore... (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

Painfully accurate write

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2004

So very true...I went to the city the other day......and I could almost hear the lack of birds.....sooooo sad.

You wake up people with your writes....that's a great thing.

ty, Dani

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

Beautifully expressed. I love this.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

What a tragedy. Yes, you are right. No one listens.

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

Enjoyed this...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

Excellent write.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

disturbing, accurate message expressed powerfully ...

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

I really loved the lines all through, but the last two clinched it for me...awesome write! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

Nicely done -- I think you are worth listening to!

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

excellent!!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

A great poem, if you find someone to listen you have found a treasure.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

a sad write,
written by one of the best
I love your work
enjoy reading it much

William

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

Perfection.

Michael

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

This is ONE sad poem. the visuals that I got are super fantastic.
very well done!

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

This is an excellent write ...

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

This is so good. Great.

Reviewed by M Flack

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Your poetry speaks more then anyone could ever express. The pain and angst is very real. Well said and very Gothic in nature...

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Sometimes you can be in a crowded room and still feel lonely and alone...but us readers in the den listen...and care...this is a powerful piece..

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Retta,
I feel the hopelessness and pain in your words, truly powerful!
This is a premium write!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

(((reindeer)))

*tears* excellent, truthful write

i'll hush, so you can talk--i'll listen (((HUGS)))

love,

karla. :(

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

YOU Got That Right!!!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

'Tis one of the worse feeling of total frustraition, written in real style!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Sad write but exquisitely done

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Heartfelt and sad write, Reindeer; but beautifully penned! Well done, my friend!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

the sad part, is that this is true. Takes a wonderful piece of work like this to jolt us into realising it.
Such a moving piece.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Retta you penned a real heartfelt very well known emotion and

frustration...i know this all too well girl!!

Best of luck and warm huggs dear friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Rein,
This is painful and I can relate no one listens that pic girlfriend wow...

HUGS and Love
Peggy

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Reindeer..this touched me to the core...I have felt this way....and awful feeling it is..you have penned it so expressively...I agree with Jill...God will always listen...great writing from you again...floria

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

It is so sad when we cry out only to have no one listen, or so it seems. God always listens, but sometimes, it does not seem that He is enough to solve the worldly shame that we often feel, even though, it's true that He does hear.
Take care.
Great write.
Jill :)

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

interesting - likening the death
conversations with life

thanks,
d.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Hi Retta,
We must be on the same page
this morning... :)

Superly done!!!

Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Andi Chrisman (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

are you inside my head? You always write how I feel. :) Another great one Retta!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2004

Been there. Great write!