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Almost Perfect
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may i feel said he
i'll squeal said she
just once said he
it's fun said she
--e e cummings

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Almost Perfect

may I kiss you said he
perchance said she
today said he
no chance said she
let’s walk said he
to where said she
among the flowers said he
but not for hours said she
are you warm said he
too warm said she
skinny dip said he
with thee said she
we make a lovely pair said he
i have a lovely pair said she
i noticed said he
about that swim said he
was it a whim said she
it was surely meant to be said he
the cows may eat my clothes said she
nobody's perfect said he
 

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 Reviews of "Almost Perfect"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 1, 2013
I never read e.e. cummings, but I've enjoyed your parody of one of his classic poems.

Ron

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on March 31, 2013
a marvelous look at perfection says me.
cheers
--d l johnson

Reviewed by Robert Johnson
Reviewed on March 31, 2013
Very original, romantic and entertaining.


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