Like snowflake Raindrop Hailstone From sky of gemstone Or of lead Feather From eagle Or sparrow Leaf From lofty tree Or lowly bush Petal From ebony orchid Or tiny snowdrop Star Meteor From endless space We all must fall Drift down like gossamer On the winds of eternity So we may rise again
IN MANY CASES, THIS IS SO TRUE...FOR I HAVE HEARD IT SAID THAT, ONCE ONE HITS THE 'BOTTOM'... THERE IS NO WHERE TO GO BUT 'UP'. THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS JUST WONDERFUL...I COULD FEEL MYSELF 'FLOATING'. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Lovely poem Regis. The title and syntax are perfect.
Regis,
Finally have time to indulge reading some of your verses. I plan on reading as many as possible since I love the way to write. Another masterpiece.
Nicole
Fantastic image with a poem to match . . . perfection!!
Best regards,
Lance
Reviewed by Cherise Carroll (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
I cannot convey how much this poem touched me today. I was in a mental rut and a friend kept trying to cheer me up. I expressed gratitude for the effort, but explained that i had to "make this trip to funky town" to get to happyland again. Relationships, work, family. LIFE. In love. From pedestals. In the eyes of others. Yes, at some point we all must fall so we may rise again. With much appreciation for your wisdom, Ciao4now Cherise
So appropriate that I pick this one after reading your "Sorrow". Perhaps you should read this too? Rise up, Regis. Very beautiful write! An insightful look at the human spirit. Love and Hugs:)
Sheila
Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2007
I loved it. Creative and thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewed by Danielle N (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2006
Loved this poem. Especially the last verse. Excellent work!!
Reviewed by Meredith Dixon (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2006
Beautiful words that are beautifully written and makes one want to fall down on the gossamer with you! Sounds delightful! Love from Meredith and God bless.
Reviewed by Amber P. (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2005
Describing of the Infinite or weightful, the words and rythem you have created -are quite vivid and insightful.
This is a beautiful write, Regis. I especially like the ending
"We all must fall
Drift down like gossamer
On the winds of eternity
So we may rise again"
Haunting
Regis, I found this poem to be profound and beautifully descriptive. The structure lends itself perfectly to the message and while reading it I felt the gentle descent of your words almost tangibly. You are most gifted. Chanti
Beautiful Regis, beautiful! Simplicity at its finest. And I thank you for all of your wonderful words :o)) The graphic you chose is exceptional.
Cheers and God bless...
Deborah :o))
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2004
We fall but we always get back up this is wonderful loved your bio page. be blessed Thank you for having been a part of my life here Regis...
Ladye Peg
Deconstruct to reconstruct... you've hand-picked some beautiful and unique images here that make a stunning impact, Regis. Some wonderful juxtapositions. Love this, TY Kate xx
The best way to receive the answers is to start at the bottom, and work your way back up. Excellent composition. Thanks for sharing it, my friend. Take good care and be well.
Falling on our rump is the best way for God to get our attention. When everything is just fine, we aren't as inclined to seek His face in all we do. This is a lovely write. Simple, elegant imagery, and inspiring. Hugs, Michelle
Absolutely, "fall so we may rise again." A lesson to be learned. Now if we can appreciate both ends so we can learn, heal, rejoice, or whatever the case may be. You have another magnificent write. Regis you never disappoint...
This combined narrative dialogue and play is about the uncreated, unborn and undying transcendent Self of God-consciousness and Buddha-nature. It describes an odyssey of transcendent Consciousness Awakening and Remembrance.
Histories of the world are generally written to either celebrate technology and science, or to herald doom. My book examines the path of the spirit in the onward rush.
The Double Mirrors and Ones and Zeros theories, by Dylan Tauber. Parallel mirrors in our minds produce a vision of the infinite. Love is all that exists. Free PDF download.
Love ya!
Jane
Finally have time to indulge reading some of your verses. I plan on reading as many as possible since I love the way to write. Another masterpiece.
Nicole
Fantastic image with a poem to match . . . perfection!!
Best regards,
Lance
Sheila
beautiful.
-Carrie
Safi
"We all must fall
Drift down like gossamer
On the winds of eternity
So we may rise again"
Haunting
Thank you, Regis. You are a master of emotion-filled words.
~Cheryl
Huda
Cheers and God bless...
Deborah :o))
Ladye Peg
Happy Holidays
best
Ian
Very creative expression with outstanding imagery! Inspiration to rise above our falls! Thanks for sharing your wise words. Blessings to you.
Cynthia
Peter
excellent write
William .....Peace & Love
A fine write.
Peace and sunshine
HH
Take care,
Sherry
wish I could defy gravity tho!
thanks for sharing!
Time for me to stay up..
Great writing Regis......
WOW! breathtaking, thought provoking, WONDERFUL write! well done, mon ami! tres bon!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Excellent!
TRASK
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D (aka twinkletoes)
love Tinka