Twirl (poem) by Regis Auffray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by lois christensen

Reviewed on August 18, 2014

I'm just a funny girl, I can twirl or swirl!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

The opposite sex tends to make us crazy. This poem reflects those feelings. Nice job:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Sandi Schraut

Reviewed on December 12, 2006

Kinda makes me dizzy lolol short and sweet! Sandi

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on December 12, 2006

I like the flow, Regis.
I am finally getting your stuff!
Yahoo!

Reviewed by Latasha Willis (Reader)

Reviewed on December 9, 2006

The poem sounds like a refrain to a song. Cute.

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi

Reviewed on November 30, 2006

A fine photo, of course. And a poem that creates a feeling of general truth from phrases that could be the product of moment's thought or sentiment caught in the net of lasting memory.

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on November 27, 2006

I love this, Reg -- very romantic. I love the way your mind works and the way your pen writes!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on November 24, 2006

lol. Such a great capture of excitement and appreciation. Liz

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on November 18, 2006

great 575 romance Regis, or is it 38-24-38

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on November 11, 2006

Lots said of romance , in a few well defined words !! WAY TO GO! ....M

Reviewed by Debashish Haar

Reviewed on November 9, 2006

You are in great romantic mood...Thanks for sharing your wonderful work, Regis.

D

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2006

weeeeell just twirl along WITH her! YAY!!!

Vesna:)

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on November 8, 2006

Very nice and romantic, Reg. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly.With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on November 8, 2006

Good ku.
Can tell you're in love...

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on November 7, 2006

"Twirl"

Very interesting write Regis!

Thought I'd take a swirl here while
I am visiting. (smile)

Blessing of love and joy to you Friend,
From the Heart of an Aritst Quiet Storm

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on November 7, 2006

Ahhhh... sounds romantic Reg... Enjoy! the feelings~ Warm HuGs, Sheeeoxo

Reviewed by Maria Charlotte (Reader)

Reviewed on November 7, 2006

How sweet!

Let her swirl!!!

Reviewed by Helen Downey

Reviewed on November 5, 2006

Sometime we get caught up in a whirl wind of emotion that makes us more confused as time goes on. You work dysplayed this well. Thanks for sharing it Reg.

Helen

Reviewed by Constance Gotsch

Reviewed on November 5, 2006

What fun. A playful moment.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 5, 2006

A beautiful and dizzifying confection of the whipping of the spirits and the coiffeuring of a yielded heart into the gladest of life-dances that makes light of our days. Puts a spring in our step and a song in our soul for certain sure! Totally delightful! :)) Bless you, K xx

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine

Reviewed on November 5, 2006

Romantic...Ku great!
Peace&Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

I love this one Reg...love at it's dizziest...all a'spin...love stuck...a grand feeling..
xo Taylor

Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

I can't write a haiku for anything, but you've done a grea job (as always).

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Flirting with devotion you are! :)

Gina

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Great Haiku!

Chrissy

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Fun romantic write!

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Profound and powerful. You have a talented heart and this Haiku shows it.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Nicely-written, Regis!!!!! I love that swirling photo. too!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Short, complete, and sweet. Lovely love note, Regis. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Few words but much said within the lines.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

Beeeautifulll.
Louisa

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2006

She has you so dizzy, keep spinning..

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Your state of mind comes through in this ku Reg! Love can certainly put us in a spin and keep us there!;-) All the best to you! ET

Reviewed by Richard Hiebner

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Flutter the bug of love whose wings does fill the heart with joy
Nice

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Your heart is dancing inside every line and your heart is making the music.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Regis ...

This succinct write is lush with the aphrodisiac of infatuation and the possibility of a more far-reaching splendor between two.

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

That sure sounds like love, to me. :-)

Carmen

Reviewed by Malcolm Watts (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Why Reg Auffray,
U clever U
yourself in love
AND in Haiku.

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

To everything TURN. TURN. TURN., there is a season..
and dear Reg, it's YOUR season of LOVE!!! Bon vivant!!!

Fantastic KU & photo, Regis!

Love&Hugs, Fifi

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

They do that to ya, don't they/

good 'ku!

john+

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Love can be a dizzying emotion. Great Haiku Reg. Love, Michelle

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Now your making me dizzy lol...short and sweet Regis.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Sounds to me like a surrender to the whirls of a women and yet, I see a twirl, as the finale of a dance and the swirl of the toilet when flushed!
I'm so abstract that I can't even see a merry-go-round, let alone a switch! HA!
Loved this one!
Love and Peace~
kimmy~

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Hi Reg-I loved this little piece.
Keep your love spinning.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Reg

The secret is never to fall out of love..;-)

Wonderful and thrilling, succinct poetry

Peter

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Always spinning love is. Loved it!

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Great love 'Ku, Reg.

Alas, love can be grand...and debilitating at the same time...but better than the flu :o)

Micke

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Ah ..l'amour! C'est super Regis! Nous l'aimons a la folie...l'amour!...mais sans ca...nous sommes quoi? Bravo! Beaucoup d'amities, amour et paix. Panda :)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

They say love is like a merry go round, easy to get on but once set in motion hard to get off again till someone kills the switch and brings it to a stop.Seems you are still waiting for the switch to be pushed, Great write
Fee

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Beautiful write, Regis, c'est maginifique! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, ton ami, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Paix et amour a toi! :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Regis!!!!!!!

Love looks good on you. :) Beautiful, sentimental, a wheeeeeeeeeeeeeee-I'm-in-looooove kind of enjoyment in haiku form; BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Isn't love just grand...;) Ed

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

When I saw the title
I knew there was a woman behind it.
Sounds like love at first sight
When you can't sleep at night
Great write.
DWB

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Oh Regis, do try not to get too dizzy, though! Nicely expressed...made me smile, too. :)

God Bless
LOL
Lena

Reviewed by Charles Keller

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

That's a good kind of dizzy, Reg. Nice work expressing your predicament.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Ab-so-lutely!!!! She is more important. Great verse here . . .

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Aaaaah, true love. Maybe you had not been yourself until you met her. I feel that way about myself and my wife. God Bless you!
Lew

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Wonderful emotion expressed twirl of Haiku Regis this is wonderful

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Even when you are not writing poetry you are poetic. Glad to know ya. Now go twirl and swirl with that gorgeous girl.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Regis, this is splendid! Not just the haiku, but your joyful spirit, as well! This work is a great expression of your passion for her...

Susan

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

This is what love can do... )))

Myrna

Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Cute lil flower

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

So beautiful

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

this is cute--what r u gonna take 4 the dizziness? Thanks for sharing & keep trekking

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Great ku Regis!!

Deep feelings within!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

You remind me of old days. Now I'm old enough not to worry. Great ku. Victor

Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

The ku of wisdom on love and women.If one can cling to the whirl,twirl and swirl it is great, but, if she manages to do all that and then cannon you with her mighty force then GOD don't even imagine about that!!!

Bom Bhole!
Roshan

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

I have been there a few times myself, Hope all works out well for you,
nicely written piece.
Steve

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

The lesson you've taught
Is that Love consumes each thought
And havoc is wrought.

Excellent bit of senryu, my friend.

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

I know the feeling

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 2, 2006

Love can do that to you. I hope she remains in your arms forever.