Smoothly sailing slowly gliding on lake of mirrored mountains and glaciers of ancient ice pure white and glistening you live your days in reflections
Silently swimming among lofty evergreens never touching their bowing boughs as they revere your passing presence from high above you glide over them on crystal water you live your days in reflections
You could be a cloud or an angel a reflection of my love
But you are Swan serene and sweet and ever so lovely reminding me of her
Your poem reminded me of watching the swans elegantly gliding along a winter stream in Yellowstone. The image, though more than thirty years old, remains vivid in my mind.
I often watch the swans when I'm walking or cycling along the canal. They are so graceful and wonderful, so different from the little moorhens and ducks that inhabit the same waters. Once in a while, I will spot a heron or crane standing silently observing the scene.
Sbelius's tone poem Swan of Tuonela is slow and mysterious and beautiful, a nice bit of work, Regis.
Swans certainly are serene. Glad they're coming back to American waterways that are being cleaned up so that they will. When I look at swans, I think of their beauty as birds. When you look at swans you see lost love.
SOMETIMES IT'S A SONG. SOMETIMES IT'S WORDS, PERHAPS A QUOTE OR AN OLD CLICHE. SOMETIMES IT'S AN AROMA, COME ON A FLEETING BREEZE OUT OF THE BLUE. SOMETIMES IT'S A MANNERISM THAT IS SO MUCH LIKE...
AND SOMETIMES IT'S A BIRD, A BEAUTIFUL SWAN, WHICH BRINGS BACK A MEMORY OF SOMEONE INDEED SO SPECIAL...AND WE ARE ELATED TO CONTENTEDLY SAVOR IT, HAVING NEVER FORGOTTEN THEM. DONE SO WELL...I ENJOYED THIS SHARING IMMENSELY, THANKS REGIS. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep
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How lovely, Regis... truly lovely!
Swoon""""
How romantic, Regis... how very romantic you wax
in this deeply stirring write.
Your "Swan" is one very blessed woman!
Love & Hugs & Blessings,
Rhonda
Rebecca
It feels so fresh and flowing..
Serene and tranquil…
I loved every word!
Diana…🌺
Sbelius's tone poem Swan of Tuonela is slow and mysterious and beautiful, a nice bit of work, Regis.
Ron
Now, that's a notion to reflect upon!
Well done, Regis.
AND SOMETIMES IT'S A BIRD, A BEAUTIFUL SWAN, WHICH BRINGS BACK A MEMORY OF SOMEONE INDEED SO SPECIAL...AND WE ARE ELATED TO CONTENTEDLY SAVOR IT, HAVING NEVER FORGOTTEN THEM. DONE SO WELL...I ENJOYED THIS SHARING IMMENSELY, THANKS REGIS. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
Stephen