Oh, Carmen, I LOVE that Hat! (poem) by Micha Julian on AuthorsDen

Oh, Carmen, I LOVE that Hat!
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yet another written SLam Piece/Topic: "Carmen Miranda's Hat" o: true ! So, enjoy the kitsch, er, warning "Bad2theBone" style Silly... Oh and yes, Adult Content, ahem, soooooo... Have a Laugh on me...and Carmen! ;-) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I am bursting in a tropical dream! Heated with seeded delight I am fruited, plumed, feather'd tho' my midriff is bare and my stomach is swirling as a turbaned Dervish Whirling himself out of sight. Oh, I'm reeling in this dream tonight! So, Hold onto your hat, Love! I want I need I must I will I am going to have you Oh? Oh! Yes, as I look into those olive eyes Your unpeeled stare, begs me to dare! Ah, Yes, My Love, with that deep puckered stare, you beg me as I, you? to dare! thus My cherried knees are melting I am Jell-o Jell-o? as you, you come hither and I... I ... oh! Ohhhhhhhh! Your kiss, a taste of tangy lemon, twist of lime and I can't breathe nor scream, no... well, not yet! I gulp your tart and sweet soft pulpy heart As soft as ripe Papaya, yes! Or is it Mango? And we dance slowly slowly reeling in and We... You. I. Ah! Oh? Why, Look, You've waited to ripen! and so... I smile, you smile Suddenly the same idea Oh, it's very hot in here! Ooooh, Carmen Miranda singing in the blaze of heat and I? Our Eyes again, meet! I am ready! are you? Oh, I am gonna ... Peel me this sweet green nearly golden, growing perfectly seamed B A N A N A what can I say? the heat just got to me this way... Oh, Darling, Caro Mio To be peeling, reeling here in Rio... as we dare to pair and share our Royal Banana Split! oh my goodness? Reel to Reel Down in Rio dream? sigh~ Oh, who wrote this? Me? Oh My!

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2003

"Your kiss, a taste
of tangy lemon, twist of lime
and I can't breathe"

Nice words... I can taste them... ;0

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on August 29, 2003

I like the way you talk. Micha this is excellent...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on August 28, 2003

So well done, Micha. Just love your style.
Amor

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

You rock, your style is always so very unique. Reminds me of the old joke about the mother telling her daughter before the honeymoon, always reserve a little mystery, never show it all, so she kept her hat on!!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Unique write of excellence!!!

Reviewed by jude forese

outstanding write!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2003

MIA,
This form and the verses so much here excellent.
"So, Hold onto your hat, Love!
I want
I need
I must
I will
I am going to have you Oh?

Oh!

Yes, as I look into those olive eyes
Your unpeeled stare, begs me to dare!
Ah, Yes, My Love, with that deep
puckered stare, you beg me as I, you?
to dare!"
Outstanding job soul sis.
Love lady Peg