DEATH REFLECTIONS (poem) by Dee C. on AuthorsDen

DEATH REFLECTIONS
by Dee C. → (All Poetry by Dee C.)
Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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*DEATH REFLECTIONS* *A gaze into those hollow black orbs* *Reflects the insanity within* *A wasteland of selfishness and control* *Once skillfully used and protected* *Those who fell within died many deaths* *DEATH of fragile self images* *DEATH of confidence and respect* *DEATH of the heart, mind and soul* *So deft at the manipulation game* *The players stripped of their innocence* *Their souls left naked and exposed* *One sweep of that savage tongue eviscerates* *Entrails lay in a steaming bloody pool* *Now barren within, a life force no longer exists* *The puppet maker controls the strings* *Making you dance in the cooling pool of blood* *Smearing footprints of a past life* *A darkness fills and surrounds you now* *A seeker of retribution you’ve become* *Others gaze into your now hollow black orbs* *Seeing the reflection of the insanity within.* *Dee* *©May 2008*

Reviewed by Debi Fairchild (Reader)

Reviewed on October 31, 2009

Great poem! You can feel the darkness watching you.

Reviewed on May 8, 2008

Excellent Dark write
Gave me the willies
But enjoyed reading just the same
Love &peace be withyou

William

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on May 6, 2008

A dark writer/poet, well done!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

Gee Dee, very poetically scarey cold and frightening, great scarey job

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Your stark and dark imagery really serves to emphasize your message, Dee. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron

A look into a sick mind that can devastate partners,
and leave scars hard to heal! Excellent poem!...ET

Devastatingly chilling write, Dee; BRRR!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Kaern Lynn. :(

Dee,

This one is CHILLING and effectively penned - wow. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.