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The Eye of God Verses the Computer Screen

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, March 7, 2006


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I put the Eye of God
Onto my machine, as background,
Since, it’s only a machine, it’s not ‘Putey',
My old user/abuser, you see?
There is no personality…

(This computer is only a machine.)

I don’t know why I don’t like being
Looked at constantly; I have cats to perform
That action. I react badly, at times.

I don’t know why I’d like life as someone
Else. I eye God as God eyes me, fretful,
Since God eyes me. Everytime Time has
Lapses of worth, it hurts…

(I don’t know how I’d look, neutralized.
But, I feel It everyday; I do know...)

I thought to get rid of God,
But, I wasn’t strong enough, it’s all
I have of divineness. Even if
Misconstrue d, God stays In Place.

I don’t.

(I put the Eye of God
onto my computer‘s screen, to stop
the screams that arise in me.)

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 3/7/06

Image Credit: NASA, The Hubble Heritage Team (AURA/STScI)
                        


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Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on August 23, 2013
God as machine? God as image? God as the all-seeing eye? I've always preferred to think of God as the diffuse consciousness who inhabits the vast and tiny interstices of the universe. So thinly covering the web of reality as to be only imperceptibly detected by the strongest will to see. A step away and a vast remove of light years breadth from us and all we know. Near and far here or, there. No need to scream my dear. It changes nothing. Just everything. protect me father, even such as i...........

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on March 20, 2006
such a stark rendition of the eternal battle betwen consciousness and divinity. i think that image is a good one to remind one's self of one's place in the cosmic order of things.

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on March 10, 2006
Whoa, there's so much here for interpretation. Very cool and a thinking poem.

Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed on March 8, 2006
Erin,

That image is incredible, and this write, even more so. I loved the lines,

"I don't know why I don't like being
Looked at constantly, I have cats to perform
That action."

"I thought to get rid of God
But I wasn't strong enough, it's all
I have of divineness, even if
Misconstrue[d. God stays in place."

Excellent!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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