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Kissing You Goodbye
by Cathrine Hottran → (All Poetry by Cathrine Hottran)
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I am still not standing,
There is air beneath my feet,
But my oceans of emotions,
Will turn cold in a one way street.

A snowstorm is soon coming,
And I just long for heat.

Oh yes it’s a beautiful rainbow,
Seen from a distant view,
But the atmosphere around it,
Is making me feel so blue.

Baby you're washing away,
All the colors I found in you.

And the flowers do need water,
Or they’ll fade and eventually die,
My tears won’t make the rain fall,
The desert will always be dry.

I will plant my garden elsewhere,
Kissing you goodbye.

 

 

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 Reviews of "Kissing You Goodbye"
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on February 21, 2006
Poem and music flow together so beautifully!
Wonderful work, Catherine.
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Rhonda Taylor
Reviewed on February 21, 2006
Very nicely expressed.
Rhonda

Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on February 16, 2006
So beautifully expressed!!! Sometimes we find it difficult but needed to remove ourselves from situations, and to make our own world take the forefront. I really liked this. Be safe, be well, M'Lady.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 16, 2006
An Outstanding piece of great poetry
Thanks for sharing
enjoyed

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by rite
Reviewed on February 16, 2006
Letting go of something that once was beautiful or that could have been beautiful in different circumstance, but for which the future holds no place, is perhaps the most difficult decission we can face in life. And from that instant on we pray our reason will continue to be able to suppress the soft linger of our heart. I enjoyed pondering your reflections. Thank you.

RAge

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
Reviewed on February 15, 2006
Very sad but fetching.

BTW, do native Norwegians still eat lots of lutefisk like they do in Minnesota?

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2006
Very insightful writing of changes.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 12, 2006
Powerful metaphors in this meaningful poem, Cathrine. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on February 12, 2006
cool poeming C, loved it

Reviewed by Leslie Bond
Reviewed on February 9, 2006
Good byes are hard to deal with, for I've had to say goodby. Excellent poem, keep the faith. Leslie

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on February 9, 2006
Baby you're washing away,
All the colors I found in you. L O V E it!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on February 9, 2006
Very touching. It's difficult to say
goodbye but what else can you do.

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2006
heart touching and the flow was wonderful, enjoyed.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Love won, love lost.
YOur words flow. Well done.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Very well done, you projected the pain and sorrow wuite well. Inspiring, actually. "Baby your washing away," [you're]

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Aww so much pain. Gotta forget his name.
And kiss a new fellow hullo....

Reviewed by Heidi K (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Ah...nok et genialt dikt fra deg der du gir oss et lite innblikk i din indre verden.

Takk for denne lille reisen til ditt indre univers.

Klem =)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Beautiful sad write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
This one has beautiful imagery C.... And the emotions expressed comes through so well in this poem. Wonderful job.

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Gives a sigh, draws a wish.
Touching write.
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
This is fantastic and I love it, the similarities and comparisons are vivid and open, and the message is strong and clear. Love must be nurtured for it to grow. Also love your new profile picture, very demure but sexy in it.

Felix

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
C,

Heartwrenching...

Very moving...

Decisive.

Peace,

B

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
Sad and wise, philosophical and decisive

a poignant poem, dear C.

Gina


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