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NaCl Release
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How many words fit inside a tear?

I often ask this question of myself
as I feel them drop down my face.
Thinking... for every grain of salt
another word disperses misery,
like misspent energy and
homogenized electrolytic thoughts.

 

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 Reviews of "NaCl Release"
Reviewed by Barbara Henry
Reviewed on February 11, 2017
Quite profound, and thought provoking.

Barbara J. Henry

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
"another word disperses misery," enough tears and misery will see a light. Love the chemistry here! Warmth and Love to you. Carin'

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on December 13, 2008
So many words to make a word and so many words cause tears. Excellent write. Liz

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2008
v.good write...lots and lots of words go into the making of tears,but at times its good..to feel them....you sort of feel more near to yourself. warm wishes sara. neerja

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 12, 2008
With each tear flows away all the hurt and agony that once was held captive inside....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on December 12, 2008
So many words go into making tears... that is for certain... and yet...sometimes it is just one word... a misplaced label.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 12, 2008
Wow this is powerful and strong even though it speaks of sadness.

fee

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on December 12, 2008
Interesting perspective, Sara. Nice poem too.
Love and {{{hugs}}},
Leland

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on December 12, 2008
Many thouhts come with the tears, clensing also comes with the tears. Good wording for your peom here and that is a good question with no more than an answer for each of us to have for ourselves.

Reviewed on December 12, 2008

"Thinking... for every grain of salt" < < < and

"homogenizes electrolytic thoughts." < < <

These bear a mind's striking imagery with a stimulating and inspiring symbolism. "... grain of salt ... A sperm of diamond in the womb of Gea with a guaranteed pregnancy of three hundred and sixty million years.

"... electrolytic thoughts." < < <

This takes me to electrochemistry, and then electrolysis; and the exoteric of this symbolic parallelism, synapses; and finally read the closing line as a center a creativity.

I have enjoyed the reading of "NaCl Release".

In respect and admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on December 12, 2008
A new way to look at tears ... brilliant, Sara!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 12, 2008
How many angels on the head of a pin? :) Be glad it's not HCl. Don't mean to make fun of you. Just thought it might bring a smile.


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