The Night Before the Morning After (poem) by Gene Williamson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 12, 2011

I love the wit (and wisdom) in this one! Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed on August 6, 2011

So true, perhaps of a one night stand
~Gene~
But your poetry is certainly not....
and so deserving of singing in the rain

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 21, 2011

Stay sober next time Darlin Gene!! Humor much enjoyed.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on July 20, 2011

Too much of a good thing makes it hard to remember just how good things can be. Excellent piece of writing.

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on July 17, 2011

Excellent, but that's what I expect reading you, Gene, you are an excellent writer, my friend :)

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 17, 2011

WELL DONE..THE REPETITIVE LINES WORK GREAT. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH....JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 15, 2011

Sluggish mis-firing synaptic activity, a strange rash bubbling on mr. peewoden, sounds like too much bad scotch leading you astray. Can't say i relate - never happened to me. (-:
Forced to chuckle gene ...
r

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 14, 2011

Thanks for sharing this gem,Gene,reminds me of some of the songs I heard when I had my restaurant and bar.;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2011

I agree with Axilea, and I love it ~

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 14, 2011

I'll bet she wasn't as pretty in the morning either...giggle....

Anna

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 13, 2011

Maybe he was with the wrong person Gene, LOL.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on July 13, 2011

Fun and intelligent, Gene, I recognize your personal touch.

Axilea

Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse

Reviewed on July 13, 2011

I remember those days back when I tied one on the night before the morning after. Excellent. So true and of course that laughter he hears tells us that whatever he was good at probably wasn't what he wanted to be good at.

This reminded me of the joke of the ninety year old man that marries a twenty something and everytime he visits her bedroom on the wedding night he forgets that he already was there a dozen times before.

To him, since he easily forgets, each time is the first time.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2011

Well darlin I know for a fact your number one in my books and you always will be...sighhhhh....wana dance baby? sighhhh....Hugsss...and more Hugsss..
Love Always,
Chanti xoxoxo...always be you darlin.....ALWAYS

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 13, 2011

I don't know how good you were last night Gene. But I do know how good you were when you wrote this song. A maestro! The tryst and the wine are strictly between the two of you. The next time you awake "hating the sunlight, and the sound of laughter". Pick up your pen and compose another masterpiece to share with us. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 13, 2011

NICE!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 12, 2011

Why? Cause you were a lush last night...;-) but still so good you were...e

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on July 12, 2011

And an excellent writing with an outstanding rhyme.
Peace
Tony

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 12, 2011

Deft, tongue-in-cheek, lyrical and witty,
all the good things good lyrics have.
i love this song, Gene.

John

Reviewed by Joy Hale

Reviewed on July 12, 2011

An absolutely tittilating lyric! Me thinks this lad had quite the hangover! You gave me a good laugh, Gene. Delightful read.

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on July 12, 2011

excellent lyrics......Morgan

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on July 12, 2011

too much rum perhaps, noise of laughter, noise of anything is like someone driving a sharp spike into your ear-drum? i take a drink, the drink takes a drink and the drink takes me....kind of like love....of bottles and sultry sea-maidens....great writing gene.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on July 12, 2011

So funny, your lyrics lighten us up, Gene!
...and I'm so glad to appreciate this the day before tomorrow :)
Many Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 12, 2011

My reply when she said, "I was so good last night," would, and have been in the past, I'm glad I was because I'm dying today.

You said, "An old song lyric, first verse." I'm assuming it was written by you..