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Silver Sea
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Silver Sea



I've lost my way in a silver sea,
In a silver sea of shine
Enduring fickle weather
In search of what is mine

Bright silver takes, vast forms of shape
From wide and full to small
I stretch my neck, to try and find
A way home from the mall

I press my key to no avail
No beeping do I hear
So up and down the rows I go
To spot my licensed rear

What numbered isle did I use
What door was my egress
From what store did I enter
I search without success

Oh why the countless silver cars
Was there a sale on paint
Through heat and snow I walk the isles
I sigh, with some complaint

To change the color of my car
And make it quite unique
Some zebra stripes or tye dye look
Would save my weary feet

Pax
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6/29/11
 

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Reviewed by Donna Swanson
Reviewed on March 3, 2012
I love this! That's the great thing about the new car keys. If I lose the van, I can just hit the panic button and broadcast to the whole mall where my car is parked! What a boon for us silver oldies!
Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on February 25, 2012
How many times have we all had such a frustration? Your style of charming our angst is not without appreciation, I'm sure. Well done.
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 9, 2011
Anita, this is witty and fun. Never happens to me. My truck is unique:)
Sheila
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Reviewed on July 6, 2011
Enjoyed this very clever pen!
Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2011
yes, do that Pat..mark it for easy spotting..i too have encountered this weary way but in search of my driver !!! He's good in 'disappearance acts' , now that i've given him a mobile......heeheee... Enjoyed this lovely write.. :)best wishes.neerja
Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 1, 2011
Funny, yes. and a little frightening. I may color my car gone. -gene.
Reviewed by Shay White
Reviewed on June 29, 2011
Oh the perils of the parking lot! What fun poem and well written, thanks for sharing.
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 29, 2011
Pax,
I'm with Amor...this is great -
written with humour and a light touch
and the point is well made, the anonymity,
sameness, conformity, death of the individual,
swallowed by corporate control.
Love it!

John
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 29, 2011
Now that's a cute little write. I hear they have chrome paint now. That way your car would outshine the rest. ;-)

Ron
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 29, 2011
This is great...I love it...not that I ever get lost and unable to find my car but if they were all the same color? who knows!
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 29, 2011
I'd go for the tye-dye look, it will rarely be copied...hope you didn't walk home...;-)e
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on June 29, 2011
amen to that!
be well, dear one!
carolyn
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