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HONEY, OUR VOWS MEANT NOTHING TO YOU ... BUT I DIDN'T KNOW
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This is a re-post from 11 years ago.
just curious to get any "second opinions."




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Honey, Our Vows Meant Nothing To You
by Tom Hyland
Monday, May 05, 2003
Rated "PG13" by the Author.



Too BLUE for you? Heartaches unleashed? Sad tale of Woe?
Les Miserables'? Too campy?
Hello? Is there a music publisher in the house?
Should I send this to little Willy Nelson - OR - just BURN it?

Honey, Our Vows Meant Nothing To You ...
(But, I Didn't Know!)

Copyright: November 27, 2001 - Thomas K. Hyland, Jr.



We Knelt in God's Holy House, Once Long Ago.
Your Eyes were like Beacons, Face all Aglow.
You were Beautiful, and I was your Beau.
It was Then that you said, "I Love you So!"

Honey, our Vows meant Nothing to You, but I Didn't Know!


I gave you my Heart, my Mind, and my Soul,
Friend, Lover, now Husband, was my Role.
My Heart Pounded with Pride, Leapt with Glee,
The World Couldn't Beat me, You Belonged to Me!

Honey, our Vows meant Nothing to You, but I Didn't Know!


We fought the Good Fight, for Thirty-Four Years,
And Weathered Life's Storms through Laughter and Tears.
God Blessed us with Two Children, and Much, Much More,
But you Crushed my Heart, when you Walked Out that Door.

Honey, our Vows meant Nothing to You, but I Didn't Know!


"For Better or Worse, for Richer or Poorer," the Words were Said,
"In Sickness and in Health, 'til Death do us Part" so we were Wed.
We were a Team, We were One, Never Ever to Part,
But Now there's No "We" 'Cept Deep Down in my Heart.

Honey, our Vows meant Nothing to You, but I Didn't Know!

Now I'm all Alone, and Feelin' so Blue,
And I Cry Real, Wet Tears, when Thinkin' of You.
Honey, if there's a Heaven, I'll be at your Side,
'Cause my Love Forgives You, my Sweetheart, my Bride!

Honey, our Vows meant Nothing to You, but I Didn't Know!


****************


Note: Written as a Country Blues song, hoping to be published.


*************



Reviewed by m j hollingshead 2/3/2005
poignant read

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 5/7/2003
I agree I can see this sung by someone very cool....Really enjoyed this thank you.....a beautiful write......Dani

Reviewed by Madame X 5/6/2003
I can see this a song maybe sung by Tim McGraw. Reach high and pick your star.
'Cept, I am thinking you forgot the dog.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 5/6/2003
Twang, perfect country song.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 5/5/2003
Beautifully done.

Reviewed by A PAX 5/5/2003
I like this Send it to willie!!

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 Reviews of "HONEY, OUR VOWS MEANT NOTHING TO YOU ... BUT I DIDN'T KNOW"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 31, 2014
A bittersweet song with a universal and timeless theme; nicely done, Tom. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 6, 2014
WOW, TOM...I FEEL THIS! YOUR LOVE, YOUR PAIN...YOUR BROKENNESS. THANK GOD FOR TIME WHICH 'HEALS'...'IF' WE LET IT. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS KEEPER. LOVE, BLESSING AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on October 5, 2014
I so sure many can relate to your ten year old poem. It's really never out of date! OK mate..

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 4, 2014
Well, did it get published...you were just as long winded even way back then & as you got older you got "worser"...by the way what does the K stand for as your middle name, maybe, "Knave, Knumb, Knuts.." wonder where I heard that...in all seriousness this is really a cool country type song and I am glad I hate conutry...luv ya, Cuz, keep on pluggin'...-e-

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on October 4, 2014
My Sue and I were married 34 years before leukemia done took her away in 2011. I still cry every now and then. Unortunately, no kids. I AM all alone, thank heaven for friends. A write I could identifynwith.

ChipB.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 4, 2014
My first question is, is it true? If not, it's a good corollary for many lives that would make a good country lament.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on October 4, 2014
Tear in my beer blues.

Michael D.

Reviewed on October 3, 2014
Honey, it's a "hit"!!! Go for it.

Love ya!

Jane


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