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Twist in Time
by kj Force → (All Poetry by kj Force)
Friday, March 27, 2015    Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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there is a fine line between life and death and knowing is questionable.


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Twist In Time As I stand here in front of my closet , starring in to space...
I wonder which black dress to choose, and how I am going to face..
All the guests that will be there, at your final resting place...
I look in the mirror and what do I see ?
But cuts and scratches all over me...
Although I don’t feel any physical pain...
Oh, what’s that I hear?... could it be rain ?
I miss you already...just what went wrong ?..
We were driving along just listening to our favorite song...
I remember the curve on that old mountain road...
And then heard the train crash... and then explode...
Time to go called out my Mother...
It was a cold November morning, and very heavy rain...
And I swear I heard the whistle of a train...
As I looked around I could see...
So many friends and family...
Standing in the crowd Aunt Sarah and Uncle Fred...
OMG ! I thought they were dead...
And there’s dear old Michael...
I had heard he died when he crashed his motorcycle...
Suddenly I saw YOU stand...
A bright red rose, you held in your hand...
What are you doing I wanted to shout...
But then I realized what you were about...
You dropped the rose upon MY grave...
It was then I realized... You were the one, that was saved...

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 Reviews of "Twist in Time"
Reviewed by leigh taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2015
wow. did not expect the ending, very Stephen King. enjoyed

Reviewed on March 28, 2015
Gripping, intense, very engaging work. Fantastic ending!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 28, 2015
Your poem certainly has a twist. And you have a starring role.

Ron

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on March 27, 2015
One for the movies. Great write!

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on March 27, 2015
Quite a write,
with twists and turns of fate,
and a touching end,
that was simply great.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 27, 2015
Quite a tantalizing tale, kj. It had me reading the lines fast to get to the end, and then WHAM! A very good ending. Then I reread it very slowly, savoring your thoughts turned into words. My kind of poem.


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