I Am From.... ( Michael Curry challenge) (poem) by Crystal-Rain Love on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 18, 2003

Excuse ME!! This is POWERFUL! This is what I [would] have said, if I could have said it the way you did. I've been TRYING!!! I may be a month or more late to the challenge, but THIS challenge should NEVER die!! I [will] tell you 'who I am'... but the time must be right; and the words as well. I'll say that you have a LOT of parallels with me. Needless to say, this touched me so deeply, my heart skipped. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on December 7, 2003

Superb poem. I would love to say I do not understand this or that it makes no sense to me, but sadly, I do and can feel each line.
Amor

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

Simply stunning write.

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

It's true... you ARE... ;)

Rodd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

You will never know how this poem has touched me. Thank you.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on November 22, 2003

Crystal, Well it might be the first time you've ever written a challenge poem, but you done it with a rushing energy. Although it made me cry, it was exquisitely written. I'm glad to know that you made it through all the negativity. I'm sure as sad as it sounds, it made you a stronger adult. Thanks for sharing you with the rest of us. Lisa

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

You are now You, Crystal-Rain, sensitive, compassionate, forgiving and beautiful, inside and out, due to your own design. I applaud you, and your piece. It cries, learns, shudders, and then rebuilds. :)

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

GREAT writing!

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

Outstanding, Crystal! This shows such depth of character and courage! You hold your head high and learn well from the trials & tribulations of your personal history, staying positive and staying true to your inner light no matter how many scars you collect from this gauntlet we call Life... truly excellent write!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

This is beautifully expressed in honesty and truth that leaves me in awe and teaches me a lot. I think that you did an outstanding job of fulfilling the challenge's criteria. Great collage as well. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Michael Curry

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

And look how you shine! Out of the fire... and tempered to a beautiful glow. A wonderful response!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

Crystal, well written. Where I come from they are called, " SURVIVORS."

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

nice write, crystal-rain; you go gurl! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

And it sure made you strong, proud and capable of great expression and vision....This was a compelling, electric and truthful poem..I enjoyed it very much.. ty, Dani

Btw�No published book for me, just yet��I�m working on it�;)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

This was outstanding, beautifully written, I loved this, every word,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

Wonderful wonderful challenge entry. Bravo!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

This is an incredible write of a woman who is extremely strong in who she is now. A survivor with new visions :-) Great response to the challenge! Thank you for the sharing.

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

Wow and you did a great job here! And, thank you for your reviews of my work.)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

Walking outside as a valued woman
Her head held high
Ready to form a new generation
A generation that will not suffer as she did.

This somehow redeems the pain. A deeply touching write so very well penned. I'm glad you have broken the chain for yourself and the next generation.

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

Crystal...goosebumps rise to the surface. This is one of the best challenges I've read. A truly beautiful soulful write. Thank you for reaching deep and sharing it with us.
Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

very powerful write!

Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

Bravo Crystal !! this is excellant!!

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

Bravo, Crystal! You covered all the bases without missing a beat, and with such grace and beauty. BTW, thank you for your kind words about "Cradle Me." We share a life in common. You might want to read "Angels Cushion Life's Blows." Love in Christ~~ Bonnie Q