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Pandora Opens The Box
by Sara L Russell → (All Poetry by Sara L Russell)
  
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[a new sonnet on the theme of legends and the origins of evil. The illustration is mine, constructed tonight in 3D and retouched.]


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Pandora slipped her hands onto the lid
Merely intending one clandestine peep,
And as she lifted, monsters of the id
Slowly began arising from their sleep.
Cruelty flew out over less wakeful beasts,
Heedless of tortured screams rising from Hell;
Diseases followed, with unholy priests
And lowly demons, sprung from Satan's well.
They came with noisy, flapping leathern wings,
With coils of questing tendrils, seeking prey,
All of the most unsavoury of things
Crawled, flew or slithered to the light of day.
It seemed that all was lost to evil's shame,
Until hope ventured out, to speak her name.

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 Reviews of "Pandora Opens The Box"
Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
Reviewed on September 22, 2004
There is always hope.

Reviewed on July 28, 2004
Sara -

Spellbinding! Excellent!


Robert

Reviewed by Meva Onyurt (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2004
It is really much easier to form the imagery of love and peace through the angelic, but you really succeed in making us feel the "hope" and peace through the evil. Which is the hardest way!
You did it! This poem reminded me of Blake's Marriage of Heaven and Hell.
Good Luck
Meva

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on December 19, 2003
I don't think there's anything wrong with the first line. I do think proclaim her name would be interesting in the last line. Otherwise, this is fabulous, as usual.

Reviewed by Sara Russell
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
Thanks Oirdheirc Mor... you have a valid point about the first line. It would probably work with either "onto" or "upon" (sorry, I am a Libran; terrible at decisions). It could be "onto" if she was standing over the box reaching down to it, or "upon" if she was looking up at the box, if it was on a shelf and she had to reach up to it. We will never know for sure....

Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
Hi Sara.
Sorry to be the lone dissenter on your poem, I did not think the first line of this poem was so very clever.
Personally I think” upon “the lid was more appropriate. Upon meaning up and onto towards.
Gives a different meaning to the movement of the hands.
Tatty by for now.

Oirdheirc Mor

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on November 18, 2003
I like this very much, and agree, its divine.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2003

Wonderful poetry Sara.....Killer last line...I love a closing that smacks you right in the face...The art is awesome.

Ty, I very much enjoyed, Dani


Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2003


Oh Sara, how utterly divine!

That last verse cut my breath off!

Well, you know what to do, eh? Submit this and pic for pub in the Winter 2004 issue of SP. It's a clincher!


Bye for now,


Richard Vallance



Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on November 13, 2003
Hi Sweetie,
You don't know the joke about hope disappearing over the horizon with its arse on fire then?
's funny but I was playing around with Pandora ideas just last week. Must be the way things are in the world.
Loved this one.
Ian

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Superb sonnet, and the art is awesome!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
Wonderful image to complement your verbal expression. Thank you for this offering.

Reviewed on November 9, 2003
Fascinating, a bit in the mode of Roberto Callesso, which was also a best seller, great theme i look forward to seeing its fruitition

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
An excellent rendition of Pandora's Box...well done!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
Sara, you did an outstanding job on the illustration and the sonnet, a joy to read! ~Z~

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
sara....wonderful write....loved the image too....love n luck....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Helga Ross
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
Excellent!
Love the image, also.


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