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The dos and don’ts of a great hard on
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The dos and don’ts of a great hard on


He came to think of nothing more
as I gave into the belief the dos of him resting in me, his penis opening me, suffocating the walls that have been closed what it seems like forever,

I spread like a rose that opens it self up to sunshine’s rays and dews wetness,

Giving life where life was not, taking me, alive I have become, twisted with hunger, passion controls the ora of the dos that he gives me,

Like ache I can only endure its pain, as I lay awoke to sexually desires and the smell of the odor that stimulates me,

We eyes opened I walk into its welling soul, asking for nothing put the dos of a hard lay,

A mixture of him and me, what a cumbo,

An all I say is take me,

As hell as no fiery like the fire that burns, I want him, his rise to fame, is what I make it to do, assisting with pleasure, my soul is damned for him, he plagues me like the lust I seek,

A seekers soul, sold to sex, giving away to the hunger I feel for him,

Yes the does of a good lay, the don’ts of not getting it,







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 Reviews of "The dos and don’ts of a great hard on"
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
Okay, girl, I see that you're another one that I, being a single woman, will not be able to read without taking a antiheat pill or some other antidote first to make sure I don't explode and do something foolish like go on date with some man I usually would ignore. LOL. Dangerous stuff here. Lord, help me. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2005
Interesting write. The title of this really grabbed me and your write was great.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on March 22, 2005
yes yes yes i see where your cumming from
wish this had a pic to it :D jk

enjoyed this tantalizing write

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2005
fun fun fun

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on March 18, 2005
Very enjoyable..."A mixture of him and me, what a cumbo" ... just perfect...

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on March 18, 2005
good write

j+

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2005
Fantastic write, the last lines is a stunner for sure:) :)

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on March 18, 2005
wow, do i ever know the truth in those last few words...a hard what?


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