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Soliloquy with My Mentor
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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You are the only person on earth who can use your ability "

 

Zig Zaglar
......................................................

 

I listened intently, as he waxed with grace

marking my crosses, and ticking my boxes

you have learned well, my friend and companion

for the road is long, and full of bends

don't press the pedal, too hard or fast

relax in full measure, with imperturbable poise

see those fools go, with reckless haste

destroying our planet, with obscene disgrace

unwilling to learn, since they first took their place

grovelling like snakes, with their belly unfazed

you are different, for your name is supreme

written with deliberation, by the great unseen hand

many are those, who come and go

passing through, like frost on the glass

for you must remember, your special remit

known only to you, since the day of your birth

and share not thy secrets, with a living soul

as the vessel that fills, empties in time

take hold of your valour, in the throes of battle

knowing you are inconquerable, with the knowledge you hold

and as I take my leave of you, remind yourself religiously

the inner man within you, continues to grow

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006

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 Reviews of "Soliloquy with My Mentor"
Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on April 25, 2009
A very thoughtful reflective poem.
Good for the soul!
Amen

Reviewed on October 26, 2008
Peter,

Bravo on this 'stand-up' write . . . nicely penned!!


Best regards,

Lance

Reviewed on November 4, 2006
A poem with great wisdom! Thank you Peter!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
Well done. Thank you for your comment on my class' poetry, the kids were thrilled

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
Amen! You have said all there is to say, for right living,in this one Peter! Bravo! You are an inspired example for us all!

Love and peace,
Eileen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
There is much wisdom in your verses, Peter. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
As we reach for the word and feed on God's Table we renew and grow deep with our souls . Our spirits unite with his truths. This is a beautiful offering and reflection of you Peter.

Thank you
Love, Blessing,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
You have learned well, Grasshopper.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Wonderful

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Only way to enlightenment is to grow & this wonderful write shows great growth...if you are done with that mentor, could you send him out my way, what with the stuff I wrote tonight, I think I am going to need him...Peace thru the Write, Ed

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Inner Man (Thought) Within You Continues To Grow,i.e.BE SO VERY WARY OF THAT THOUGHT WHICH YOU THINK (LEAVES)BECOMES HOLOCAUST TODAY...

Excellently Done Peter...

Your Friend, TRASK

Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
"The inner man within you continues to grow" I like those words. When we stop growing we begin to lose hope. Marguerite

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Beautiful write...

Chrissy

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Your dialogue is personal yet so wonderfully universal.
What a wonderful spirit you have. Always so positive and eager.
Your words inspire..........

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
"the inner man within you, continues to grow"

This is the heart of all mankind and it is a fine message of wisdom. Thank you ,Peter for pointing this out to me and the rest if us. You are special.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
This verses came from a very courageous, and truthful heart.

Carmen

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Peter the Expositor ...

The Creator christens all men with a gift and a responsibility to pursue that gift for His glory. So many fail here.

I have observed, in the six months now that I have been affiliated with AD, that you have become more outspoken and brave with the expressions of your faith.

Of course this is only my opinion. But I should tell you that I am comforted by these expressions.

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
We become more complete the more the inner man grows. Never fear fear.. Well said Peter..

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Like Gandalf speaking to Frodo or Bilbo at some stage... Love the intimacy of this poem, Peter... and the respect and faith that is shown to the up-coming tutee, too. Instills a "can-do" spirit which is the fundament of all learning - together with the ignition of the spark of wonder and enthusiasm which will steer it. You give us here an insight into a Master Teacher at work, bringing light, wisdom and grace into the life of a cherished pupil. Lovely work! TY K xx

Reviewed on November 2, 2006
In God we are being renewed daily and grow in the spirit. This soliloquy had me reading in the manner of Shakespeare. Yes Peter, we are born with a foreordained, divinely imputed script that only God knows about. He knows those who accept and reject Him.
I often stand out in the back garden at night when it is dark (I'm a late bedder) and silent and enter into audible dialogue with God. It is usually of the self punishing variety to begin with. By the time I finish, I accept that God accepted me as I am and not what I think I should be.
As ever, reflective work that compells the reader to do likewise.

Reviewed on November 2, 2006
What a delightful read. Your muse (or mentor) was truly with you this day with words to instruct and impress us all! to the library with this...

Micke

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
"Even a child is known by his fruit."

Peter,

The abundance and purity of your fruit, reflects the authority and impact of your Mentor.

Indescribable poetry, that fairly twinkles with Wisdom!

Bless you!
Love&Prayers, Rhonda

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
'and as I take my leave of you, remind yourself religiously
the inner man within you, continues to grow'

Indeed it does....that spirit inside will grow forever if we but listen..and allow it to. wonderful writing Peter!

love and hugs, Myrna

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
We should all have the wisdom your mentor imparts to you so gracefully
Fee

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Wonderful mentor for everybody to have had.


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