Oh, I am a poet
Don't you know it
I can rhyme
On the drop of a dime
But do I really wax poetic
Or do I cop out
To use my clout
To spout an opinion ever so erratic
When I shake a little advice
Clad in wordy disguise
From that Thinking Tree
Is that truly poetry?
There ought to be words
Like none you ever use or see
Unless you devour a dictionary --
There ought to be words!
Ah yes, I ought to use a lot of
Words ending in 'xxtion'
So you may consider the ramification
Now please don't boff
At the notion for when the fountain
Of words overflows
And my posted poem grows
To magnificent proportion
Like a snow-capped mountain
Standing tall against the hot wind's nip
--oops, I had better bite my lip--
Then I must be a poet?
OK, now when you're done expressing
Your admiration at this wordy creation
Then stop to think:
How many of these words were needed
To make me see...
She's just having fun with me
Gina, 2007
Oh, Sometimes eloquently expressed, lavishly thought-out poems, put out by a fevered mind, amount to only a rave or a rant...are these more valid for being clad in verbosity and for being delivered with a good deal of drama?
Well Gina, I see your passion and humor is never ending. You truly have some deep insight and convey it most intelligently. I love your work because it always brings a smile to my face.
Fan-'dang'-tas-tic!! Really, Regina, this is g r e a t. Rules abound -- cut the adjectives, show-don't-tell, use concrete language, make it understandable {or don't?} --, but when it comes down to it, a poem speaks to us, or it doesn't. If it speaks, we feel or don't. Hear music or. . .'w h a t??' Best not to dwell on rules, right?
As for Great Thoughts, sometime the simplest notion. . .you know. Then there are writers like me who use any excuse to go on and on and. . .whoa. Time for my On&On Anonymous meeting. Thanks for writing and posting this gem. Hugs! Pea
Wow I truly enjoyed this beautiful rhymes
beautifully expressed poetic thoughts
I love the flow and wisdom that comes through
This excellent rhymes words!
Love Peace and Hugssss to you always...Morning Star
I enjoy anything you have to say Gina! When it's you writing the more the better;-)
ET
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on July 29, 2007
Enjoyed this light hearted write my friend, fun and whimsical...write on, we'll be waiting to read your wonderful postings dear poetess!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Gina, I can see you smile over this one...and if even my e-mails weren't 3 or 4 pages, I'd deny ever using words for the sheer joy of...using words. But like those literary critics who read way too much into everything, you now have me debating whether verbosity or brevity is more important in the grand scheme of things!
Glad to see the muse finds you, again.
Leslie
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
You write beautiful words and your rhymes are great, just keep writing. Victor
Ah, verbosity, you've caught me in my cuberoskippee. Jonathan Holden defines poetry as rhythmic, high-energy English, which probably is because English is his language not because he dislikes Japanese so we can poets as we wuz. I like his definition, and I like yours. Fun is good, good is fun, we thank him for our neighborhood. Oooh this is awful. You're puncturing my false intellect, and my real one too...Jerry
Metered to poetic perfection . . . finely penned.
Best wishes,
Lance
I can relate to that:) Safi
CJ
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Making fun out of oneself is perhaps one of the real great achievements - and a subtle and poignant reminder to others...
Creating a rhyme
like squeezing a lime
or sell it for a dime!
from whereever you komm
at poetry dott com.
Hehe cheers Franz
The wit part of "Words" doesn't cloud the brilliance of its imagery and of its message's contents. It is a poetic feast.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
I loved it, thanks for sharing Gina
Peace be with you
Love
William
And your lovely and captivating words have always held me in your magical grip
Love and Blessings
Peter
Regis
As for Great Thoughts, sometime the simplest notion. . .you know. Then there are writers like me who use any excuse to go on and on and. . .whoa. Time for my On&On Anonymous meeting. Thanks for writing and posting this gem. Hugs! Pea
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beautifully expressed poetic thoughts
I love the flow and wisdom that comes through
This excellent rhymes words!
Love Peace and Hugssss to you always...Morning Star
ET
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Be safe,
Karen
Love ALWAYS Tinka
Glad to see the muse finds you, again.
Leslie