Beautiful poem with a great structure and progression of thoughts. I was surprised to read "killing babies" which is something final, followed by "taking them not softly like petals from a flower" which an unusual idea, as they are now dead. Interesting writing.
I have taken pride in writing this novel as so many people have the wrong impression on bikers because they dress in leather clothing which is to protect themselves in case of an accident. The majority of bikers are known Policemen, Firemen, Doctors,
Axilea
Felix