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Circular Feelings
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I can see him sitting there
Gazing and gazing at me
He loves me so, he doesn't care
That all the world can see.
Yet I know that when he asks me
If I love him too,
I must answer sadly
That this I cannot do.
I don't love him though I try
And when I see his face
Falling, it will make me cry
Feeling in his place.
For I love somebody too
Who doesn't care for me
If I ask him how he feels
He'll smile in sympathy.
For he's in love with someone too,
Someone who doesn't care...

Isn't it a sorry world with nobody to pair?
 

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 Reviews of "Circular Feelings"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 6, 2006
sometimes love is a reductio ad absurdum going round and round ...

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Unrequited love, it's a tough one. I think of a Midsummer Night's Dream and see all the lovers chasing the wrong person. Ill met by moonlight. In a perfect world, we would be taught love lessons in a community circle, but, as you know, we have to hunt on our own. Best wishes. kenny

Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Pretty write, Loretta; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
What a nicely written and telling prose. If this is true, then I hope someday that you find and stay with the one true love in your life. Love is really all about freedom. It's been said "women are from Venus and men from Mars," and why is it that we sometimes want someone we cannot have? Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria


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