Time is thought of meaning witch passes
Thru threads that dangle to sea...
A crown that has resin only
To awake from the dreams of eternity...
Call's that dance with ray's of light
Tree's that have fallen...
I smile within...
As I look within you...
Your moon light...
Meter is a little off, and misspellings, but I like the verse itself. Need some polish. 'Witch', should be spelled 'which'. 'Thought of meaning' would read better if it was 'thought and meaning' and first line needs a break...shift 'which passes' to next line. That's where the meter is off. Would be a good poem otherwise. ~E
Deemed One of the Top 10 indie Fantasy releases of 2010 by Fantasy Book Critic, and listed in the first ever Publishers Weekly Indie Select issue, the original 235k word epic title was written in longhand in a Texas prison cell by M. R. Mathias.
BOOK I of THE JADE OWL LEGACY SERIES: An out of work Chinese History Professor crosses paths with a young scamp in San Francisco and becomes part of a quest for a lost and dangerous Chinese relic.
Your green-eyed cat
what lovely words...from a beautiful heart.
talk to you soon.
hugs always
krissy
debby
Call me soon
Miss ya!
Sandie Angel :o)
Pretty piece. Gregg