

Sunset Tears
H.J. Cruz
7/11
Unabated by documentary dissection, she motions,
Passion fruit warmed on a desert oasis,
She’s a temptuous typhoon, I, a skiff in a riptide,
Wind in her sheets, her pointed lungs, her hair.
Prime, primal, provocative; tearing moral fabric,
Boys need not apply, nor meek minded minstrels,
One taste; one addiction, senses snared, loins ache,
Counting curves by candlelight; dimples of dispensation,
Humbling the Gods with weighty compensation,
I found sunset tears on a windswept boardwalk,
Love is but a noun, genesis reigns,
The quantum queen sequesters my soul.
I’d walk a mile through gnashing teeth,
To lay my head upon your door mat,
Dare I defile my dimensional deity?
Shall I devour, ravage oh precious Prometheus.
With mortar & pistol taunt antagonistic alchemy,
Safflower seduction & misty mischievous mockery,
Her, creations concubine, a fleshy feast foretold,
I a butterfly explore her folds for nervy nexus.
I but a notch on a bedpost, a boost on a bangcock barometer,
Yet it is in the now I can uncoil evolutions spine,
Sipping mountain dew like a Gieco gecko,
Temptation lost, I thrust again and again.
A moan, a whimper, a whine,
A whine? Oh, say it ain’t so
Amidst ecstasy my blow up beauty got a hole,
Quickly I perform mouth to mouth,
But she’s gone, gone, gone with the wind,
My sweet sunset tears, now a latex scaffold!
Copyright
H.J. Cruz
7-11-08
Edwin
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It took me by surprise and busted out laughing
That was a fantastic twist
Brilliant poem and truly hon st and
profound raw sexuality!!
Peace Love and Hugessss...Morning star
Love,
Sage
Good write
Fee
Regis
But what matters is you twisting but good the panties of some readers.
Georg
Very profound erotica indeed!
Passion oozed out from many lines!
This is super great surprising poetry from you heartfelt heart!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexoooo
STay Positive!
I am a bit speechless, your poem really rocked my world, tonight, I didn't expect this from the title, but man you packed a punch with your ending..Loved your passion, eroticism, and profound raw sexuality...
You are one fine poet!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber
"V"
Your words are Sensual & Exotic & I Love This Beautiful Express!
This Is An Equisite Romantic Write, the Elegance of Love & Passion just flow from your pen!! Your words just captivated me!!
Very Beautiful Poetry!!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie