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Sunset Tears
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Looking for love in all the wrong places?

 

Sunset Tears

 

H.J. Cruz

7/11

 

Unabated by documentary dissection, she motions,

Passion fruit warmed on a desert oasis,

She’s a temptuous typhoon, I, a skiff in a riptide,

Wind in her sheets, her pointed lungs, her hair.

 

Prime, primal, provocative; tearing moral fabric,

Boys need not apply, nor meek minded minstrels,

One taste; one addiction, senses snared, loins ache,

Counting curves by candlelight; dimples of dispensation,

 

Humbling the Gods with weighty compensation,

I found sunset tears on a windswept boardwalk,

Love is but a noun, genesis reigns,

The quantum queen sequesters my soul.

 

I’d walk a mile through gnashing teeth,

To lay my head upon your door mat,

Dare I defile my dimensional deity?

Shall I devour, ravage oh precious Prometheus.

 

With mortar & pistol taunt antagonistic alchemy,

Safflower seduction & misty mischievous mockery,

Her, creations concubine, a fleshy feast foretold,

I a butterfly explore her folds for nervy nexus.

 

I but a notch on a bedpost, a boost on a bangcock barometer,

Yet it is in the now I can uncoil  evolutions spine,

Sipping mountain dew like a Gieco gecko,

Temptation lost, I thrust again and again.

 

A moan, a whimper, a whine,

A whine? Oh, say it ain’t so

Amidst ecstasy my blow up beauty got a hole,

Quickly I perform mouth to mouth,

But she’s gone, gone, gone with the wind,

My sweet sunset tears, now a latex scaffold!

 

 

 

Copyright

H.J. Cruz

7-11-08

 

 


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 Reviews of "Sunset Tears"
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Very captivating,beautifully written poem,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on February 15, 2009
Excellent work.

~W~

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 6, 2009
I'm sitting here with a smile on my face...this is incredible...and your ending...totally unexpected.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
enjoyed the read

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
Woooow I was not expecting that type of ending
It took me by surprise and busted out laughing
That was a fantastic twist
Brilliant poem and truly hon st and
profound raw sexuality!!
Peace Love and Hugessss...Morning star

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on July 16, 2008
WHAT A HOOT! The end was priceless! Goober! You is the cutest little ole thang! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
LOL well damn, will the store give you a refund? what an explosive poem!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
This is by far, your best HJ...such well-thought out lines and well-chosen words. This is reality! A blow-up doll! What a finale! This has such cross-over potential. When a writer can get themselves out of a pigeon-hole, writing more than one genre, (even in one poem!) this is a good writer. I have seen this from you lately, your versitility. Sunset Tears is well written with a latex twist...kudos...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
A beautiful and romantic write.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
The lure of love or the lust of desire...either way we fall with open hearts and closed eyes far more often in our lifetimes than we should.
Good write

Fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
Wow! Harsh... ...but honest. Thanks, H. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on July 12, 2008
You are such a knave Sir Honey Jam! And yet I do believe you deserve a "Real" woman LOL! Loved the poem and the suprise ending.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
WOW!

Reviewed by Tom Kitt
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
This is a sad poem and so true. The cyclops must waste its storm. What chance truth when the one-eyed monster is loose. As usual, no holds barred from HJ, well done. Tom

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
HJ, most have take you an awful lot of time inflating her, no wonder you got windless after all that job!
But what matters is you twisting but good the panties of some readers.

Georg

Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Alright HJ
Very profound erotica indeed!
Passion oozed out from many lines!
This is super great surprising poetry from you heartfelt heart!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexoooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
HJ,
I am a bit speechless, your poem really rocked my world, tonight, I didn't expect this from the title, but man you packed a punch with your ending..Loved your passion, eroticism, and profound raw sexuality...
You are one fine poet!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber
"V"

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Good profounding written love poem. Words I would not even think about came into your write. I analyzed them and find them to be right. So good a write and it will be read by lots. A good write.

Reviewed on July 11, 2008
HJ,
Your words are Sensual & Exotic & I Love This Beautiful Express!
This Is An Equisite Romantic Write, the Elegance of Love & Passion just flow from your pen!! Your words just captivated me!!
Very Beautiful Poetry!!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie


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