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Foggy Vision
by Pat Alvarado → (All Poetry by Pat Alvarado)
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Today I opened my eyes, and the fog slipped under my door.


I stared as it crept along the floor to my feet


and slid up my legs, covered my arms and caressed my face.


I inhaled, and it entered through my nose.


I held it captive as long as I dared.


When it begged to be released, I exhaled.


So  it exited through my nose, spit me in the face,


and wet my arms.


Then it slid from the top of my legs to the bottom of my feet,


Rolled along the floor and fled under the door.


Then I closed my eyes and sighed a breath of relief.


 


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 Reviews of "Foggy Vision"
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 10, 2008
A touch of Eliot's Prufrock here (his cat image) and with the appropriate sensuality

Reviewed by Anna M
Reviewed on November 19, 2006
I enjoyed this poem. It is original and vivid

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
It's weird, but I like it, Pat.
I enjoy reading poems out of the ordinary.
Glad I stopped by.

Bonnie

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on June 8, 2004
wow. this is really great. some great images.


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