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Come Sit With Me-Revised
by D L Johnson → (All Poetry by D L Johnson)
Tuesday, August 14, 2018    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Originally posted 12 years ago.

Come Sit with Me-Revised
© 2006~18 March, 2013
Dan Johnson

come sit with me on this fallen log
we will talk of love…love now and ever more

walk with me to the meadow
where willows bend
and the winding creek blends time
with fingers dancing through soft and sensuous ripples
while summer breezes gently blow

come sit with me on this grassy knoll
we will drink sweet wine…
get lost in each others glow
And forget about father time

cross the creek with me, we’ll go to where lovers go
let’s walk until the sun falls down

come sit with me we’ll snuggle close
while the moon adjusts its brilliant crown.


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 Reviews of "Come Sit With Me-Revised"
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on August 15, 2018
"we will drink sweet wine…
get lost in each others glow
And forget about father time"

You betcha!!!

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on August 15, 2018
Sometimes just sitting next to each other can be pure bliss. No words are necessary.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 15, 2018
I envy those, perhaps you, who have experienced this with a loved one. It was something I sought in my youth, but never achieved. To think that young women would be even attracted to going off with me, a pimply faced skinny kid, to even have a picnic under a shade tree by the creek? Oh, how I longed for a beautiful fishing buddy. It never happened. Those experiences you wrote about in this poem, for me were real, but very lonely without her love.

Ron

Reviewed on August 14, 2018
I liked this. This is like so softly spoken and imageries you have created are so beautiful! I have not read the first version, but this revised version obviously has my vote.

Sandie

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 14, 2018
Nice imagery and thoughts.
"where willows bend
and the winding creek blends time"
This phrase is very effective IMO. Well done. Enjoyed. r


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