For all of you who enjoyed
Instructions to Adam and Eve.
When first I filled the glory of My heaven
With say… a billion, perhaps a trillion stars,
I never thought, to My great disdain,
You’d fill your streets with just as many cars.
Just to enchant you; you my favourite children,
I gave you love’n beauty, above and below,
only to find, to my further chagrin
that even I can make a fundamental flaw.
I thought I’d made you, truly in My likeness.
Hoping love’n beauty will give you a great thrill.
Alas even I, Almighty as I AM,
have erred, well… divinely, by giving you free will.
rhyme and rhythm pure joy, a delight. I'll be tracking your work as you have something to say and you say it well. Insightful and melodic.
Best Regards J'nia Fowler
To go our own way with free will was the result of
Adam and Eve's sin. Just so we choose the right now, but many go astray and many come back. By God's leading I hope free will takes all in the right place at the right time and all end of with God in his kingdom.
Homer's Ill Iliad & Odd Sea Odyssey (420 pages) is an adult satire/parody rewrite of the classic stories of the 10 year Trojan War and of the 10 year adventure of Odysseus trying to return home to his native Ithaca.
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Best Regards J'nia Fowler
Wise ontological spiritual meditation.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Adam and Eve's sin. Just so we choose the right now, but many go astray and many come back. By God's leading I hope free will takes all in the right place at the right time and all end of with God in his kingdom.
I'm sure you took the words right from out of Gods mouth with this one.
Excellent piece of poetry.
All the best--Gerry