Final Bubble's burst (poem) by Marissa M Couchon on AuthorsDen

Final Bubble's burst
by Marissa M Couchon → (All Poetry by Marissa M Couchon)
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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Going through the things we shared Reading cards and the things you wrote After all the thing were said I can’t help but wonder Were they all lies, did you ever really care? You don’t know what you’ve done to me You’ve left me floundering again You broke my heart a final time I won’t let you do it again I stood by you through many things Supported you when you needed it most Even saved your life a time or two I’d do it again should the need arise You used to make me laugh even if I was mad Now you act like “So now you’re mad.” I’m glad You sing as if nothing is wrong when our lives are falling part. Is there really nothing left in your heart That you are glad we are done? What happened to two as One? Is it really all gone? Are we really done? Your answers will decide if this is permanent or not I thought I’d live out my days with you Now I see that may not be A bit of me has died inside My final bubble’s burst I've finally accepted we were never one You've done your worst We are finally done Now that my final bubble's burst!

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on March 8, 2015

ITS BEEN A WHILE SINCE THIS WAS INITIALLY POSTED AND NOW...I HOPE THINGS WITH YOU ARE BETTER. YOU EXPRESS WELL YOUR FEELINGS OF WANTING TO MAKE A FINAL DECISION...GO OR NO. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 17, 2013

Truly a very personal piece written especially for a single reader. I hope it is cathartic for you.

Ron

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on August 16, 2013

This poem tells a really sad story. I wish I could be there to hold you and tell you it will be all right, but my experience tells me that right now that's a hollow promise.

I guess whatever doesn't kill us makes us stronger.

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Nice poetic query, Marissa...

Sage