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El Rio de los Remedios: Scrabble War X
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Bow to the Queen of Slime, the Queen of Filth, the Queen of Putrescence. Boo. Boo. Rubbish. Filth. Slime. Muck. Boo. Boo. Boo.
Your play, Charlie.


 

El Rio de los Remedios
 
In the squirming midst of la Gran Ciudad  
       (mass of raza)
lies the river
       (and I say "lies" because that's what she is . . .
       named by the devil himself --
       for he calls things what they are not)
and she oozes every
kind of remedy
that no one ever wanted
       - a remedy for health
       - a remedy for progress
       - a remedy for solidarity
       - a remedy for hope


Then came the new Narcissus
       (so much better than last year's model . . .
       loved by all and freshly heralded --
       dreams awash with progress and salvation)
to rest on her bleeding banks
to stare into her putrid past
to tell her he was different from
the long line of liars who
laughed upstream.
But as he gazed into her fetid, semi-solid mirror,
he saw his predecessors.


He saw what they were
but she told him what they were not.
He saw what he was
but she told him what he was,


       naught.

And he loved her lies.

So, with a deep breath
and a wily smile,
he pitched forward
into her corruption
and slipped below
the murky surface.


 

Author's Note:  El Rio de los Remedios (The River of Remedies) is a drainage canal of waste water (read "open sewage") that flows through the northern part of Mexico City.  This poem is about no one in particular -- only the sad march of corrupt officials that the country has endured.

 

 
   
 

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 Reviews of "El Rio de los Remedios: Scrabble War X"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 8, 2008
Your description and authors note make me think of Haiti... (not that it is hard to take my mind there... hee,hee...)

I love the imagery and asides in this piece.

Cryssa

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Leo - You've created a profound myth with this poem. Unique images and metaphor. - David

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on January 11, 2008
powerful and interesting~`*

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 24, 2007
This is hardscrabble poetry with a twist. It had me thinking about the Snake River and that medicine woman who tried to save your soul as long as there was money coming.

Ron

Reviewed by William Cryer (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2007
A triumph, more startling than most that came before. If only I had an ounce of your wizardry. And I'll pocket your gleaming token with a smile and the hopes of many a fond romp through those most exalted groves--Poetry, the true Jardin de las Delicias. Ahi guarde mi alma y ahi nos veremos.

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2007
what?? where is William going?
but. . what a glorious spiral of symbolism. ..
all the secrety goodness of storytelling myred by the muck, all the underbelly dark privies. ..
yet something in this [maybe its my sinister side], especially as the words traipsed through my head, made me smile infinitely. . .nothing like a good beheading. ..a strange tangent that is traversing both classical and modern lines. ..clever balancing act. .
superbly conceived.
huzzah~

Reviewed on December 13, 2007
Excellently penned challenge, Leo, I have enjoyed watching two masters parry. :) *Oops, wrong sport* Anyway, been fun ... well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on December 13, 2007
Puts you in the know, this one. Though where is there NO corruption? Great metaphor.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 13, 2007
Superb metaphor in this poetic pot-pourri written with much brilliance...

Reviewed by Leo Durrant
Reviewed on December 13, 2007
Funny that Charlie should mention William Cryer. This poem was written partly as a tribute to him, as he is in his last bit of time here in our den. Godspeed, sire. Godspeed.
And PS, Charlie . . . you spelled truly wrong. Can I challenge? hehehe

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on December 13, 2007
Trully, your intellect is dizzying. To love that you are nothing, and so desire a plunge into hellish, fetid water? You, my dear, are brilliant.
This reminds me a lot of William (the) Cryer's poetry-- all that fantasy mixed with vivid color and mysterious, ethereal atmosphere.
I really love your asides here-- it makes me feel like you're letting me in on a great secret. And I also love the sense I get reading this and pre-knowing the outcome-- the want to holler a warning out to prince Narcissus, but alas, "his emptiness consumed him." And you end with "the murky surface"-- not a bad line either, so thank you. Take care. BTW: Ogress episode continues as a commentary to Ted Bossis' latest poem. (It's a kissing book) --Charlie


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