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Two Wheels Good: A True Story
by Eric Pinder → (All Poetry by Eric Pinder)
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Some vehicles are more equal than others.


I've never written much "serious" poetry, being better at fiction and nonfiction. But some life experiences just can't be documented in ordinary prose. This silly little rhyme is from Sheep Football and Other Strange Tales. 
 
Once I had a little car.
It never traveled very far.
On every trip I’d end up towed.
I rode my bike, unless it snowed.
My car broke down again today.
There’s only one thing left to say.
My bike has never made me sad.
Two wheels good…


         Four wheels bad.
 


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 Reviews of "Two Wheels Good: A True Story"
Reviewed by Regis Schilken
Reviewed on March 6, 2011
Clever words, Eric!

rege

Reviewed by Leslie Bond
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
A bike will keep you in better shape, and make you live longer too. Good poem, Les Bond

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2008
A delightful poem indeed..

blessings,

vesna :)

Reviewed by Jennifer Christian
Reviewed on September 7, 2008
What a cute poem. :)

Reviewed by Joanna Leone
Reviewed on July 17, 2008
I love this poem. It is well written. Also, I want to mention that with the price of gas these days, i think your poem would be great in a commercial! I look forward to reading more of your work. Please stop into my authors den sometime, as I would love to hear your review of one of my poems or short stories.

Reviewed on July 9, 2008
Hello Eric,

This is my style of poetry-wish you'd write more of it.

Cynthia

Reviewed by c lea harris
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
two wheels are good, sometimes safer and faster than four, in the summer time here in northern mi, people seem to be on two wheels, been thinking about it myself, havne't been on one, in such a long time, they say you never forget, but it seems to be the way to go, esepically the price of gas these days.

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
lololol, this was great, so funny-and anyone who has had hard times could appreciate it well!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Enjoyed very much..stay safe and well...HUgssss

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
This is so very delightful and yes, a bicycle is sometimes more dependable than a car, enjoyed....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
...wonderful thoughts...reliability found...in this spokesmans...bike.
with smiles...
John

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
We had a car like that while we were growing up.
We called her "Rolls Canardly" (Short for Can Hardly Roll)

You took me back to that time with your humor.

Cryssa :~)


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