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Halloween Ku
by Lori L Moore → (All Poetry by Lori L Moore)
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Halloween

the vampire settles

for a Hershey’s kiss

 

November 1st-

candy wrappers

roam the streets

 

witches and warlocks-

little monsters

behind the masks

 

bruised for days

her trick

was not a treat


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 Reviews of "Halloween Ku"
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
Well done as usual. It has been awhile has it not?

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 17, 2010
It's not Halloween but your creative expression is just as effective and enjoyable, Lori. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on March 23, 2010
Wow! Last stanza stirs dark images. Love it beautiful lady! x

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 31, 2009
VERY GOOD IMAGERY...WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on October 31, 2009
deep halloween Lori, maybe she should have stuck with candy, treats

Reviewed on October 29, 2009
Wonderfully done, Lori.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 28, 2009
The first three fill me with the warm fuzzies, Lori, in the sense that I feel they address the exuberance of childhood innocence "behind the freakin mask!"... but my goodness, the counterpoint of the fist in the velvet glove of the fourth! The stark reality of life that is a living hell for some. Yes, this holiday is largely taken in fun, but can we be surprised if there's an upsurge in grievous bodily violence on the back of it? We jollify, glorify and act out gore then condemn the real thing... seems crazy to me... But I'll not be the spectre at the feast! Great Ku as always. thanks, Kate xx

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on October 27, 2009
Clever and amusing. well done.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
clever, fantastic Halloween ku,Lori! Loved all, but especially the last one;-)

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Gorgeous renderings, Lori; the final one has a dark resonance and the intended pun makes it more so.
These are great.

John

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
"Sweetly cute." he said, his breath heavy with chocolately hallow-tosis.

Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Strong diversity from sweet innocence to brutal reality...wow

Fee

Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Smiled at the first three, BAM, hit by the fourth - powerfully penned sadness. :( Well done, Lori.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Love these, Lori. Saddened by #4. -gene.

Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Oh my what a twist at the end!! Well penned and enjoyed Lori.

Reviewed by Bennett Kremen
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
The last one's a bruiser.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Very entertaining...as Kuul as they come. I read the last two stanzas two different ways and prefer to look at it like Jerry and his red light district sense of humor. The other way puts a bit of a damper on of sadness on it all. Tie goes to the reader.Patrick

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Damn, that's a clever one! Good stuff.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
What a creative way to keep the eyes reading until the end.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Hah! The last one / Gotta love it . . .

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Absolutely loved them all!!! Your ku's are wonderful, Lori. Write on!!

Anna

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
..each one is as good as the next!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Each one is so clever, Lori, I loved them all. I love Halloween and I also love writing Halloween poems. I guess it is time to start thinking about doing that.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
Love the first one, and the last one is quite sad.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 25, 2009
Each one a treat


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