The car - a sardine can with wheels Racing up, down and around Train tracks on mountain slopes Six vacationing fish All oiled up for the occasion Anxiously peer through windows Dreaming of a can opener A steering wheel confused On the wrong side of the car Turns back and forth At the force of the drive
They ride All anxiously quiet Being in a first time place Then… A wooden bridge ahead The noisy wheels rumbling Loudly over the planks. Seemingly rehearsed just for this moment A goat and her young appear Crossing the wooden bridge The mama goat glares At the noisy touring sardines Baaaaa – she scolds… A peculiar moment of silence follows… And then, a burst of hysterical laughter The six sardines liberate gut-wrenching guffaws With tears flowing… laughing At what, they weren’t quite sure…
But they are later to recognize That life’s most enjoyable times Have nothing to do with places or things But have everything to do with Who you spend that time with While taking pleasure In the simplest of things… All is well with the world… And the only affirmation, is laughter! Rumble, rumble, rumble… Baaaaaaaaaaa
THE WORD SAYS, '...LAUGHTER...IS MEDICINE...' BUT WHO COULD HAVE GUESSED THAT THE APPEARANCE OF A GOAT AND HER YOUNG CROSSING A WOODEN BRIDGE WOULD HAVE PROVOKED THIS MARVELOUS BALM...SO NEEDED AND ENJOYED AMONG FRIENDS. GREAT IMAGERY IN THIS EXCELLENT WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
LOL, this was so refreshing, love that opening stanza, had me thinking of these sheep books for kids by an author with the last name of Shaw-anyway, this was really creative with some fantastic imagery, good job.
there is creativity here of tremendous depth Janice Beaty Springs -- a great analogy, a humorous story and poetry of rich imagination --
it is always so good to read your work -- I go away with a refreshed feeling each time -- sans those we care for, to share life's joys, there is no joy -- peace and love to you my dear friend -- JMW
Farhad Shirazi, a three star general of the ex-Shah's army who has been hiding in Iran for nine years,needs to escape From Ayatollah Khomeini's Iran or face capture and execution by the revolutionary guards...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
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Regis
it is always so good to read your work -- I go away with a refreshed feeling each time -- sans those we care for, to share life's joys, there is no joy -- peace and love to you my dear friend -- JMW
Edwin