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Rolleston's Revenge
by Alan Greenhalgh → (All Poetry by Alan Greenhalgh)
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A true story based upon a foolhardy attempt to climb Mount Rolleston, one of New Zealand's most treacherous mountains.

The mighty craggy mountain,
Hidden by grey misty gloom,
Has such cruel and steep ramparts
Where many have met their doom.
Battlements of crumbling rock,
And huge bluffs bring trembling fear.
His pockmarked face is awash,
With rain's soft and cleansing tear.

This morning we assail him,
To climb his great daunting walls,
That mockingly confront us,
As the soaking rain still falls.
With valiant efforts puny
Against such awesome power.
Up through the eerie silence,
We'll scale his soaring tower!

Fingers grab at weathered stone,
On faint trails of climbers old.
The few that tried and failed,
Are white bones now still and cold.
Sharp crampons stabbing footholds,
On Rolleston's frozen face,
It's onward to the summit
At a crawling snail's pace.

Gasping breath and straining thighs,
And grim determination.
The sleeping giant's aroused,
By our lofty aspiration.
Tiny ants on upward climb,
Annoy his ancient skin,
He responds with rumbling growl,
Through the air so cold and thin.

Unseen hands in anger throw,
A wrathful tide of rocks and muck.
We've mortal fear and no recourse,
To run, weave, dive or duck.
We stare into our Maker's face,
With poor hearts now pounding loud,
Will death be our certain fate,
Upon this mountain proud?

To one side in a deep ravine,
Roars the avalanche of might.
With a prayer we watch it pass,
A timely warning of our plight.
So turning now, we retrace our steps,
And heed the Giant's call.
He's won again, but we're saved
From grim death beneath a rocky pall.

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 Reviews of "Rolleston's Revenge"
Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on September 13, 2016
had me up until the last stanza. "A timely warning of our plight...
An avalanch seems so much more than a "warning" - "with a prayer we watch it pass"... This gift of grace Devine... This nod to mortal life... with the last four lines an acknowlegement, paying your respects, sending up a prayer of thanks, ect. then continuing the climb. Just a thought.

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
This is great. I'm so glad everyone was OK.
I live in the Rocky Mountains. They sound small to your sleeping giant.
Good story and cadence.
Enjoyed--RaeLynn


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