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Murky Dream
by Lori S. Maynard → (All Poetry by Lori S. Maynard)
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I fell, a pale shadow, stretched o'er the ground.
Light barely touching the lost soul within.
Blades of grass twisting beneath my weight.
Heart broken...dreams forgotten...life's own sin.

Shine your light and disperse the darkness.
Don't let me lay forgotten in the sunlight
facedown in puddles of murky dreams
of things once loved…now lost…from sight.

©October 5, 2009 Lori Maynard

-Unfinished poem
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 Reviews of "Murky Dream"
Reviewed by Thomas Mutchler
Reviewed on May 21, 2013
Still nicely written. Enjoyed.

Tom
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 8, 2009
Even in its "unfinished" state, this poem is most compelling, Lori. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on December 7, 2009
I'd like to see where this one goes. The beginning is promising. Look forward to more, Lori - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on December 6, 2009
Fascinating write, Lori. Dream on.... -gene.
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on December 6, 2009
Don't give up, finish this poem. I see you have loads of talent. I will remember you!

GOD BLESS
Tony Nerone
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 6, 2009
A well Penned Unfinished poem
Most enjoyable reading
Love & Peace be with you

William
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