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Guided tour of mankind
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Welcome to the guided tour of mankind
Forget everything you were ever taught
Man’s record is going to blow your mind
And get geared up for a train of thought
That will make you believe that you are
Being warned about some far away star
Where the sole aim of life seems to be
Total destruction of care and sympathy


To the rear you see man’s bloody past
From where howls of agony echo still
And although man’s past could not last
History is written with a stabbing quill
Smeared on ruby hued and torn pages
From which sorrow exuded since ages
Murder, treason and limitless brutality
It’s the gory smell of mankind’s history


To the left you see a diversity of pain
That is intended to be inflicted on you
You were born to be abused and slain
Against which nothing anyone can do
The machinery of anguish is flawless
It’s a chronic bequest of the lawless
Onto the vulgar yet blameless breed
Meant to suffer the torment decreed


To the right you see the face of fear
Hypnotizing you into numb paralysis
It is aiming to penetrate and adhere
Not a possibility escapes its analysis
Fright never once miscalculated yet
Fear feels at home inside your head
It saturates each fibre of your being
Leaving not one prospect for fleeing


And in between where we now stand
Is captivated the momentary present
An instant you will never understand
When you think of it, it already went
To join the barbaric pain of the past
Your pitiful wit is casually outclassed
Simple to create chaos in your mind
Since you’re deaf, foolish and blind


Below you see the bottomless abyss
From where you feel fires' heat rise
The ache you currently suffer is bliss
Life is really nothing but elfish guise
Compared to the nick of hell below
Where each of you will certainly go
Take a good look at what awaits you
And enjoy the pain now hurting you


But first we must go to futures ahead
All of which seem horrid and obscure
None of which you do not direly dread
Still, I hope you enjoyed this little tour
Never mind the one direction ignored
It’s a place that will never be restored
There is nothing there but a lot of lies
Beyond those aloof and lazuline skies



 
 
 
 
 
 
 


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Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Although I don't understand the nature behind "Quantum Physics" (it's all Greek to me--and Pakistani, Hindi, Japanese, Spanish, etc. LOL), this poem is very good. Very well done, .Unda! :)

Reviewed by rite
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Considering this life is comprised of many lies and few truth, the poem above could as well be titled the "misguided tour of mankind". QP shows us different truths that we are unfamiliar with, that often defy the logic we have embraced, making a joke out of it. I believe in the One Light, the Undisputed Truth that loves mankind, in spite of all it flaws, so much that the words in this poem will become the joke they are in what will one time be the enlightened mind of mankind. Thank you both for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it very much.



U


Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
In my favorite group of positive friends and clients Quantum Physics is always mentioned along with the positives given off to overturn the negative. It works for all of us. When you want harmony, are positive and turn away the negatives in your day to day, it is possible to see harmony gain some ground. I'd like to think mankind can do this if enough people start seeing with their minds eye the positive future and strive for making it complete. I believe in mankind. I believe in you too Chris!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed on October 12, 2007
A brilliant write but I want to scream out "Say it's not so!!" So good to see you here again.


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